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Band 4+: The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two graphs detailing reasons for working from home and hours worked from home by gender in 2019. The bar graph shows higher percentages of males working from home to save money (45%) and be more productive (24%) and higher percentages of females working from home for easier childcare (26%). The table shows more males working over 30 hours (81%) and more females working under 10 hours (74%) from home.

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The bar chart illustrates the ledies and gents work from home. while, table chart illustrates the hours of work in 2019

Looking from an overall perspective it is evident that, the male work showed decreased. moreover, the highest hours of work under 10 by females and over 30 males.

According to the provided data , under 10 meles was least hours work at 3%. whereas, it was slightly increased 10 to 30 by 16% , after that significant greaw over 30 males then work percentage was 80. in addition female over 30 was least hours work in 2019. then 10 to 30 at 22% and under 10 at 74% work per week for females given time period.

To begin with, highest save money was males at 45% ,it was slightly fall for female at 42%. on the other hand, male was least work easier childcare at 4%. finally, it was significant increased for female work easier childcare at 26% end of time period.

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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female: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The overview is weak and doesn't effectively summarise the main trends. The body paragraphs present some relevant data, but the analysis is superficial and lacks depth. There are also issues with grammar and vocabulary that affect the overall clarity of the report. To improve, focus on providing a more comprehensive overview, ensuring data accuracy, and using more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The introduction is weak, and the overview is not well-defined. The body paragraphs jump between different aspects of the data without clear transitions, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related information together. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is some repetition of words and phrases. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more accurately and avoid monotony. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'work,' consider synonyms like 'employment,' 'labor,' or 'job.' Also, try to use more specific terms to describe the trends and comparisons. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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