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Band 5+: The following chart provides information regarding the fertility in births per woman in six Gulf states from 1990 to 2000.

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The image presents a bar chart titled 'Fertility Rate (Births per Woman) Gulf Countries 1990-2000', detailing data for six nations in two distinct years. In 1990, the fertility rates were: Bahrain 3.5, Kuwait 3.5, Qatar 4.2, Oman 7.0, S. Arabia 6.8, and UAE 4.1. In 2000, the rates were: Bahrain 2.5, Kuwait 2.8, Qatar 3.5, Oman 5.5, S. Arabia 5.5, and UAE 3.0.

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The following bar chart depicts changes in fertility rate in 6 Arabic countries between 1990 and 2000.

Overall, the amount of children per female dropped everywhere (in every region). Although Oman and S. Arabia had the highest rates than others in both years (as in 2000), women in Oman had about 7 children in 1990, while women in Bahrain and Kuwait gave a birth two times less and had about 4 children. In addition, fertility rates in Qatar and UAE were approximately 4.2.

By the 2000, birth rates markedly dropped in 30% in Oman and Saudi Arabia, but still were in the top. The figures also leveled out in 25% in UAE, which registered the same numbers to Bahrain and Kuwait – below three births per woman.

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The report covers the requirements of the task, providing an overview of the fertility rates in the six Gulf states between 1990 and 2000. There is a clear overall statement and some specific data points are mentioned. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., 'women in Bahrain and Kuwait gave a birth two times less and had about 4 children'). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and consider a more structured approach, perhaps dedicating paragraphs to different aspects or groupings of the data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report presents a general overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping countries with similar trends together or using more explicit transition words to guide the reader. The paragraphing is acceptable, but the connection between sentences within paragraphs could be strengthened.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'dropped,' consider using synonyms like 'decreased,' 'declined,' or 'reduced.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to demographic trends. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. Review and correct the errors identified by the grammar checker to improve the overall accuracy of your writing.

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