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Band 4+: The graph and bar chart below show the average rainfall and temperature for one region in East Africa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The image shows average monthly rainfall and temperature in an East African region. Rainfall (mm): Jan 50, Feb 10, Mar 170, Apr 270, May 140, Jun 10, Jul 10, Aug 10, Sep 10, Oct 120, Nov 150, Dec 10. Temperature (°C): Jan 22.5, Feb 23.5, Mar 23, Apr 22, May 21.5, Jun 19.5, Jul 19, Aug 19, Sep 20, Oct 21.5, Nov 22.5, Dec 23.

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The given graph illustrate the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region in East Africa. There is a rapid changes in 12 months.

The rainfall in the first 3 months is quite similar in comparison to another months , but in the april rainfall surge to nearly 250. Whereas the temperature in this 4 months have slightly changed. Since june to September rainfall is steady while the temperature between this months significantly droped and soar again from 21 degree to about 23 in September.

From October to November rainfall had grew up from 19 to 21 in comparison to September. Meanwhile the temperature also had changed in this 2 months. In December the rainfall and temperature dropped significantly.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

rainfall: 6

temperature: 5

months: 5

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but lacks detail and accuracy in describing the data. The language used is not always precise, and there are some issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and using more accurate language to describe trends and comparisons. Also, ensure that the report covers all key aspects of the data provided. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not always presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Consider using more cohesive devices and structuring the report into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data (e.g., rainfall trends, temperature trends, comparisons between the two). For example, you could dedicate one paragraph to describing the rainfall pattern, another to the temperature pattern, and a third to comparing and contrasting the two.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., "rapid changes," "surge," "grew up"). To improve, try to use more specific and descriptive language to convey the data accurately. For example, instead of "rapid changes," you could say "significant fluctuations." Instead of "grew up," use "increased." Also, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to describing trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. For example, "rainfall surge to nearly 250" should be "rainfall surged to nearly 250." "Rainfall had grew up from 19 to 21" should be "rainfall had increased from 19 to 21". Pay close attention to verb tenses, article usage, and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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