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Band 5+: The graph and table below show the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain in 2004 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar graph and table detailing visitors to Britain from 2004 to 2005. Monthly visitor count for Jan 2004 is approximately 700, Feb 2004 slightly above 600, Mar 2004 over 800, June 2004 just above 800, Sept 2004 around 700, Dec 2004 near 600, Jan 2005 reaches 800, Mar 2005 surpasses 800, June 2005 slightly above 700, Sept 2005 slightly below 800, Dec 2005 reaching 700. The table lists top visitor countries: 2004 - Japan, Australia, USA, China, South Korea; 2005 - Australia, Japan, USA, South Korea, India with percentage changes: Australia +2%, Japan -3%, USA +2%, South Korea +7%, India +13%.

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The graph shows the number of foreign visitors and the table shows the percentage of 5 countries (Japan, Australia, USA, China, and South Korea) that frequently visited Britain from 2004 to 2005.

Overall, it can be seen that the number of visitors fluctuated over the period and most tourist visits were in December, while September was the least visited month among others. The percentage of visitors from South Korea and China showed increase over the time period.

Looking at the details, most people visited Britain during December, slightly over 800,000 tourists. In contrast, September was the month when less visitors occured, approximately 300,000 visitors. January, June and December are among months when overseas visited the most, while in March and September experienced least tourists.

With regards to top 5 countries, the percentage of people visited Britain from South Korea showed the increase, at +13%, while Australian visitors declined over time, at -3%. Other countries such as Japan, USA experienced rise in the number of visitors and showed same patterns, at +2%. China along with South Korea showed incease in +7%.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

visitors: 7

visited: 5

south: 4

showed: 4

number: 3

percentage: 3

countries: 3

china: 3

britain: 3

december: 3

while: 3

september: 3

korea: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the graph contains some incorrect data. The table data also contains some inaccuracies. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting and avoid misinterpreting the information provided in the visual aids.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but there are some inconsistencies in the flow. The overall structure is present, but the transitions between ideas could be smoother. For instance, the shift from the overview to the details about specific months feels somewhat abrupt. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs, creating a more logical progression of ideas. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single, clear topic to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While the report conveys the main points, the language is somewhat basic and repetitive. Try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to tourism and statistical trends. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'visited,' consider alternatives like 'travelled to,' 'sojourned in,' or 'frequented.' Also, be mindful of collocations to ensure that the word choices sound natural and idiomatic. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'Australian visitors declined over time, at -3%' contains an awkward phrasing. To improve, carefully proofread the report for grammatical errors, paying attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Also, consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors.

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