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Band 6+: The graph below compares the percentage of unemployed workers in the European Union (all workers) with the percentages in the three categories, Professional, Manual and Self-employed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image details the percentage of unemployed workers in the EU (1990-1999). For the years 1990 through 1999 respectively, the percentages are: All workers - 4.8, 5.4, 4.2, 6.8, 9.6, 10.8, 12.0, 12.4, 11.2, 10.2; Professional workers - 1.8, 1.8, 1.2, 2.4, 3.4, 4.0, 4.6, 5.4, 2.6, 1.8; Manual workers - 7.2, 8.2, 9.0, 12.6, 14.4, 12.2, 8.2, 8.2, 8.2, 9.6; Self-employed workers - 6.0, 6.6, 4.8, 8.4, 10.8, 12.0, 12.4, 12.4, 12.4, 12.4.

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The line graph provides information about the percentages of unemployed workers in Europe with three different categories and the average percentage of all unemployed workers.

Overall, the percentage of all workers and self-employed workers initially faced slight decline, after what both showed a significant rise, with slight decline of all workers at the end of the period. The percentage of manual workers experienced a sharp increase then showed a collapse. Notably, the percentage of professional workers fluctuated significantly during the period, however remained an unchanged at the end of the period.

Regarding self-employed worker the figure was initially at 6%, followed by the percentage of all workers at about 5%, both figures declined slightly in 1991, then showed a significant growth at about 12%, however in 1997 the percentage of all workers dropped gradually, accounting for 10%, whereas the percentage of self-employed workers remained stable.

As for manual worker, the percentage was at about 7%, after what showed a sharp increase from 1991 to 1993, however, in 1995 the category faced a sharp fall then experienced a stable decline by the end of the period, stood at approximately 10%. Turning to professional workers, the percentage experienced sharp fluctuations, however, at the end of the period the percentage remained an unchanged.

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percentage: 10

about: 4

showed: 4

period: 4

sharp: 4

however: 4

self-employed: 3

decline: 3

experienced: 3

remained: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main trends and making comparisons across the categories. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., the initial values for all workers and manual workers, and the stability of self-employed workers) and some vague descriptions (e.g., 'sharp fluctuations' without specific data). To improve, ensure that all key data points are accurately reported and that comparisons are more precise. Additionally, avoid minor grammatical errors and ensure that the report remains focused on the most significant features.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each category. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'after what' instead of 'after which'). The use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical, and the progression of ideas could be smoother. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic with logical development.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'decline', 'rise', 'fluctuated', 'stable'), but there are some inaccuracies and repetitions. For example, 'collapse' is too strong for a decrease, and 'remained an unchanged' is not idiomatic. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure collocations are correct (e.g., 'experienced a decline' instead of 'faced slight decline'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include 'after what' instead of 'after which', 'remained an unchanged' instead of 'remained unchanged', and missing articles or prepositions. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, use correct relative clauses, and ensure verb tenses are consistent. A wider range of structures, such as passive voice and conditional forms, would also enhance the response.

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