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Band 5+: The graph below compares the percentage of unemployed workers in the European Union (all workers) with the percentages in the three categories, Professional, Manual and Self-employed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image details the percentage of unemployed workers in the EU (1990-1999). For the years 1990 through 1999 respectively, the percentages are: All workers - 4.8, 5.4, 4.2, 6.8, 9.6, 10.8, 12.0, 12.4, 11.2, 10.2; Professional workers - 1.8, 1.8, 1.2, 2.4, 3.4, 4.0, 4.6, 5.4, 2.6, 1.8; Manual workers - 7.2, 8.2, 9.0, 12.6, 14.4, 12.2, 8.2, 8.2, 8.2, 9.6; Self-employed workers - 6.0, 6.6, 4.8, 8.4, 10.8, 12.0, 12.4, 12.4, 12.4, 12.4.

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The linegraph illustrates the propotion of unemployed workers over all workers in the European Union in three different categories, including Professional, Manual and Self-employed from 1990 to 1999

Overall, the figures for self-employed, manual and all workers witnessed upward trends, while the percentage of the profession category tended to stay unchanged during the period. Evidently, the figure for the professional workers was always lower than those of three other groups.

In 1990, the percentage of the manual workers stood at around 7% and was the highest number, followed by the self-employed workers (6%). Then, the figure for manual group recorded a slight increase to 9% in 1992, before rocketing and reaching a peak at around 14%, then declining dramatically to roughly 8% in 1996 and ending at approximately 10% in 1999. For manual workers, the percentage for it declined slight to 4%, then going up considerably to around 12.5% and remaining unchanged in the last period.

For all workers category, the figure for it decreased and increased continuously, then ending at 2% in 1999, the same as that of in 1990. When it comes to all workers, the propotion for that group fell slowly to 4%, before grow remarkably to 12% in 1997 and decreasing gradually to 1999 in the end of the graph.

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workers: 9

manual: 5

self-employed: 3

percentage: 3

figure: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and confusions in the data presentation, particularly in the second half of the report where the descriptions of the 'Professional' and 'All workers' categories are mixed up and contain incorrect figures. The overall structure is clear, but the report would benefit from more precise data reporting and clearer organization. Focus on accurately reporting the data for each category and ensuring that the trends described match the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for different categories. However, the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'it' and 'that' without clear antecedents) and some confusing phrasing (e.g., 'For manual workers, the percentage for it declined slight to 4%' - this seems to refer to professional workers but is unclear). The paragraphing could be improved by grouping related information more clearly and using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader. Ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic and that pronouns clearly refer to the intended noun.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'witnessed upward trends', 'rocketing', 'declining dramatically', 'remaining unchanged'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'propotion', 'profession' instead of 'professional', 'grow' instead of 'growth') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'the figure for it', 'the propotion for that group'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of 'figure' and 'percentage'. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a range of sentence structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses. However, there are several grammatical errors and issues with punctuation (e.g., missing commas, run-on sentences). For example, 'The linegraph illustrates the propotion of unemployed workers over all workers in the European Union in three different categories, including Professional, Manual and Self-employed from 1990 to 1999' is a long sentence that could be broken down. There are also subject-verb agreement issues and incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'declined slight' should be 'declined slightly', 'grow remarkably' should be 'grew remarkably'). The report would benefit from more careful proofreading and a focus on using accurate grammatical structures.

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