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The image depicts a line graph showing average monthly contract costs of four cellular companies, DOMO, LEX, SIM TX, ALPHA, from January to September 2012 in euros; data points are: January values are DOMO 15, LEX 11, SIM TX 9, ALPHA 5; February values are DOMO 17, LEX 11, SIM TX 10, ALPHA 6; March values are DOMO 16, LEX 10, SIM TX 8, ALPHA 7; April values are DOMO 19, LEX 12, SIM TX 12, ALPHA 8; May values are DOMO 22, LEX 12, SIM TX 10, ALPHA 8; June values are DOMO 22, LEX 14, SIM TX 8, ALPHA 7; July values are DOMO 26, LEX 16, SIM TX 6, ALPHA 7; August values are DOMO 29, LEX 21, SIM TX 5, ALPHA 5; September values are DOMO 31, LEX 23, SIM TX 9, ALPHA 2.

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The line graph illustrates the average cost of monthly contract of four different cellular companies in a particular country of Europe from january to september in 2012 measured in euros. Overall, the data of all four companies fluctuated, while domo cost was the highest and Alpha cost was the lowest, but later it gradually increased.

In the first five months, domo cost was the highest which was around 15 to 20 euros. LEX cost was the second highest starting eith approximately 13 euroes in the first month then it fluctuated rest of the month. From june, both DOMO and LEX faced slightly ups and downs in cost and then in august DOMO decreased while LEX went up a little.

The cost of both SIM TX and ALPHA was the lowest in in the first five months. In june the cost of SIM TX rose a liitle, while the cost of ALPHA went down which was around 4 euros. After that, SIM TX plunged while ALpha increased dramatically reaching the highest cost which was 25 euros by the end of september.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but specific data points are often incorrect or vague (e.g., stating DOMO decreased in August when it actually increased, and claiming ALPHA reached 25 euros by September when it was 2 euros). The description of trends for SIM TX and ALPHA is largely inaccurate. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main trends and supporting them with correct data. Ensure that all companies are described with relevant figures and that the overall summary is clear and precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs, but the organization of information within the body paragraphs is somewhat unclear. The progression of ideas is not always smooth, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'but later it gradually increased' is vague). The paragraphing could be improved by clearly separating the description of each company or grouping them more logically. To enhance coherence, use a clear topic sentence for each paragraph and ensure that the sequence of data points is presented in a way that is easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'gradually increased', 'plunged', 'increased dramatically'), but the range is limited and there are inaccuracies in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'cost was the highest' instead of 'had the highest cost', 'faced slightly ups and downs' instead of 'experienced slight fluctuations'). There is also repetition of 'cost' and 'went up/down'. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'peaked', 'dipped', 'remained stable', 'soared'). Ensure that the vocabulary is used accurately and naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that impede clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'domo cost was' should be 'the cost of DOMO was'), incorrect prepositions (e.g., 'in in the first five months'), misspellings (e.g., 'eith', 'euroes', 'liitle', 'Alpha' vs 'ALPHA'), and inconsistent capitalization (e.g., 'domo' vs 'DOMO'). The sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex constructions. To improve, focus on proofreading for basic errors, use a wider range of sentence structures (e.g., subordinate clauses, passive voice), and ensure that all sentences are grammatically correct and clearly expressed.

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