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Band 5+: The graph shows how much money was spent on foreign investment in real estate for four Asian countries from 2014 to 2024.

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The image presents a line graph titled 'ASIAN INVESTMENT IN FOREIGN REAL ESTATE' with a y-axis of 'US $ BILLIONS' and an x-axis of 'YEAR'. Data points for the four listed Asian countries are as follows, in billions of US dollars: China (2014: 230, 2016: 230, 2018: 230, 2020: 180, 2022: 60, 2024: 30); Singapore (2014: 150, 2016: 130, 2018: 110, 2020: 60, 2022: 40, 2024: 60); Korea (2014: 90, 2016: 75, 2018: 110, 2020: 60, 2022: 180, 2024: 180); Japan (2014: 30, 2016: 40, 2018: 60, 2020: 110, 2022: 170, 2024: 220).

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The provided map illustrates information about the amount of billions given Asian investment in foreign real estate between 2014 and 2024. Overall, the trend of Japan and Korea went up the top but China and Singapore dropped in 2024.

As can be seen from the graph, in 2014 to 2018, the amount of China stayed constant, there was a slow fell in the number of billions in Singapore. The trend of Korea fluctuated to around 125. The amount of billion in Japan increased about 50 billion.

Therefore, in 2018 to 2024, the foreigners in China steadily declined from 250 to around 25. The billion of Korea slightly decreased to about 75 but there was a moderate rise in 2020 to 2022, The amount of Singapore waved wildly and the trend was downward. The number of foreigners in Japan suddenly went up to well over 200.

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trend: 3

japan: 3

korea: 3

china: 3

singapore: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general trends for the four countries, and it makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., China's starting value, Korea's fluctuations, and Japan's increase), and some descriptions are vague or imprecise (e.g., 'waved wildly', 'increased about 50 billion'). The report would benefit from more precise data references and clearer comparisons between countries. Additionally, the opening sentence refers to a 'map' instead of a 'graph', which is a minor but noticeable error. Overall, the main features are covered, but the inaccuracies and lack of clarity prevent a higher score. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and two body paragraphs, but the progression of ideas is sometimes difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and occasionally inaccurate (e.g., 'Therefore' is used incorrectly to introduce a new time period). The paragraphing is acceptable, but the logical flow within and between paragraphs could be improved. To enhance coherence, use a range of linking words and phrases accurately, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea that is developed logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that detract from clarity. For example, 'the amount of billions given Asian investment' is unclear, and 'waved wildly' is not a precise or natural way to describe fluctuations. There is some attempt to use a range of vocabulary (e.g., 'steadily declined', 'moderate rise'), but the overall control is limited. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'investment in foreign real estate', 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'dropped sharply') and ensure that the vocabulary is used accurately in context. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect readability. For example, there are missing commas, incorrect verb forms ('there was a slow fell'), and subject-verb agreement problems. The errors are frequent enough to require some effort from the reader. To improve, focus on sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and punctuation. Reviewing common grammar points such as subject-verb agreement, past tense forms, and the use of articles would be beneficial.

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