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Band 5+: The graph below gives historical information and projections about changes in population in the United States, Nigeria and Japan.

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The image displays a line graph illustrating population changes in the United States, Nigeria, and Japan from 1950 to 2050; United States starts at approximately 150 million in 1950, rises to about 300 million by 2000, and is projected to reach close to 400 million by 2050; Nigeria begins at around 50 million in 1950, grows to roughly 125 million by 2000, and is anticipated to surge to about 600 million by 2050; Japan's population is near 85 million in 1950, climbs to around 125 million by 2000, but decreases to under 150 million by 2050.

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The line chart illustrates the population of the Usa,Japan and nigeria countries changed from 1950 to 2050.

Overall,it is clear that the Usa and Nigeria experienced an upward trend,while japan increased slightly at first and then almost declined throught the period.

As can be seen that, the population changes in Usa and Nigeria were almost 200 million and 50 million in 1950,respectively. After that Usa gradually went up to 300 million in 2000.on the other hand Nigeria population increased to almost 150 million in same year.moreover usa slightly increased to more than 400 million in the end of the year.following that Nigeria steadily grew to at the top at 600 million in 2050.

As per remaining data,the population figure for Japan had 100 million in the first year.later it almost same between 1950 and 2050.subsequently which rise to about 150 million in 2000 then again this figure progresively decreased to more than 100 by the end of the period.

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The report addresses the task by describing the main trends for the three countries, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the initial population for the USA is stated as 200 million instead of 150 million, and Japan's population is described as 'almost same between 1950 and 2050' which is misleading. The report also lacks precise data for some points and has minor grammatical and spelling errors. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and clearer organization of information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes incorrect (e.g., 'As can be seen that', 'As per remaining data'). Paragraphing is present but not always clear. To improve, focus on using a range of linking words accurately and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'experienced an upward trend'). However, there are inaccuracies and limited range (e.g., 'Usa' instead of 'USA', 'nigeria' instead of 'Nigeria', 'almost declined' instead of 'declined slightly'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary and ensure correct spelling and capitalization of proper nouns.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure issues. For example, 'the population changes in Usa and Nigeria were almost 200 million and 50 million' should be 'the populations of the USA and Nigeria were approximately 200 million and 50 million'. There are also run-on sentences and missing punctuation. To improve, practice writing complex sentences with accurate grammar and review basic punctuation rules.

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