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Band 5+: The line graph shows the average distance in kilometers travelled annually per person using three different modes of transport in a European city between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a line graph titled 'Average annual distance travelled per person by mode of transport in a European city', with the vertical axis displaying 'kilometers' ranging from 0 to 9,000 in 500-unit intervals, and the horizontal axis displaying the years 2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, and 2020. Data values across the three modes are as follows: Private Car records 8,500 km in 2000, approximately 8,200 km in 2005, approximately 7,800 km in 2010, approximately 7,200 km in 2015, and 6,000 km in 2020; Public Transport records 3,000 km in 2000, 3,500 km in 2005, approximately 4,200 km in 2010, approximately 5,100 km in 2015, and approximately 5,800 km in 2020; Bicycle/Walking records approximately 800 km in 2000, 1,000 km in 2005, approximately 1,300 km in 2010, approximately 1,800 km in 2015, and 2,500 km in 2020.

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The given line graph illustrates the average range in kilometers travelled yearly per person using three distinct modes of transport in a European city from 2000 to 2020 over a period of 20 years.

Overall, it can be seen that the average annual distance travelled per person by mode of transport in a European city. Private car experienced a significant decline, In contrast, Public transport rose to a peak over the period. Meanwhile bicycle and walking experienced a increasing during this time.

In the beginning, in 2000, Avarage annual distance travelled per person by private car began around 8,500 kilometers at 2000, and dipped to 6,000 kilometers In 2020. On the other hand, Public transport started 3,000 kilometers at 2000 and rose to a peak stood at around 5,800 kilometers In 2020. Bicycle and walking both are began around 800 kilometers at 2000 and peaking closing to 2,500 kilometers In 2020.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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kilometers: 7

transport: 4

travelled: 3

person: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends for all three modes of transport, and it includes relevant data points. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the overview is somewhat unclear and contains a grammatical error ('experienced a increasing'), and the final paragraph lacks a clear comparison between the modes. Additionally, some data points are imprecise (e.g., 'peaking closing to 2,500' instead of 'reaching approximately 2,500'). To improve, ensure the overview clearly states the main trends and make direct comparisons between the modes, while using more precise language and checking for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the overview is incomplete and contains a grammatical error that disrupts clarity. The body paragraph presents data in a logical order, but the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'In contrast' is used incorrectly). Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed. To improve, ensure the overview is a complete sentence that clearly summarises the main trends, and use a wider range of linking words and referencing to improve flow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'significant decline', 'rose to a peak', 'dipped'), but there are several inaccuracies and repetitions. For example, 'average range' is not the correct term, and 'Avarage' is misspelled. The phrase 'peaking closing to' is awkward. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'plateaued', 'gradually increased') and ensure correct spelling and word choice. Avoid repeating the same phrases, such as 'average annual distance travelled per person'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates some variety in sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, the overview sentence is incomplete ('...by mode of transport in a European city.'), and there are issues with subject-verb agreement ('Bicycle and walking both are began'), tense consistency, and article usage. Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing commas after introductory phrases). To improve, focus on writing complete sentences, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and using correct tenses. Reviewing punctuation rules and proofreading for common errors would be beneficial.

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