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Band 8+: The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph of birth and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101, with birth rates starting at around 30, peaking at 70 in 1961, and declining to around 40, while death rates start at around 10, peaking at 20 in 2011, and declining to around 10.

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The line chart illustrates the fluctuations and the long-term trends in the birth and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.

Overall, New Zealand witnessed a significant increase in the level of childbirth and mortality and will experience this upward trend in the future. Additionally, the death rates are expected to outnumber the birth rates in the last sixty years of the period.

To specify, in 1901, there were around 20000 births reported, which was roughly twice the number of deaths, at about 10000 cases. After showing a tremendous rise and reaching the highest point at nearly 65000 cases in 1961, the number of childbirths fluctuated considerably in the next 40 years. Meanwhile, there was a remarkable growth in the mortality rate from 1941 to 2001 after a slight fluctuation in the first 20 years of the period.

On the other hand, the birth rates are predicted to equal that of dead people in 2041. Over time, the mortality rates will rocket and reach a peak at 60000 cases in 2061 whereas the birth rates will gradually decrease to around 42000 cases in 2101.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

rates: 6

birth: 4

cases: 4

mortality: 3

years: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and highlighting key trends in birth and death rates. It makes relevant comparisons, such as noting that death rates are expected to surpass birth rates in the latter part of the period. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., birth rates starting at 30 per thousand, not 20,000 cases; death rates peaking at 20 per thousand, not 60,000 cases) and a few omissions (e.g., the exact peak of birth rates in 1961 and the decline in death rates after 2011). To improve, ensure that the figures are presented accurately and that all main features are covered, including the projected decline in death rates after 2061. The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise in describing trends and projections.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective, and the progression of ideas is logical. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the transition between the second and third paragraphs ('To specify' and 'On the other hand') which could be smoother. The paragraphing is managed well, but the final paragraph could be more clearly linked to the preceding one.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary with appropriate use of terms like 'fluctuations', 'long-term trends', 'witnessed', 'outnumber', and 'rocket'. The language is generally natural and precise. There are a few minor issues, such as 'the level of childbirth and mortality' which could be more idiomatic (e.g., 'birth and death rates'), and 'dead people' which is less formal than 'deaths'. Overall, the lexical resource is strong and shows flexibility. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, and demonstrates good grammatical control. There are minor errors and phrasing issues, such as 'will experience this upward trend' (which could be 'is expected to experience'), and 'the birth rates are predicted to equal that of dead people' (which should be 'those of deaths'). Punctuation is generally correct. The overall grammatical range and accuracy are high, with only minor lapses.

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