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The image presents a line graph displaying the percentage of populations residing in urban areas from 1970 to 2040 (forecasted for 2030 and 2040) for the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia, with trends showing an overall increase for all four countries. The Philippines begins around 35% and reaches just below 80%, Malaysia starts slightly higher and ends just above 80%, Thailand commences at 15% rising to 60%, and Indonesia starts near 15% with a predicted 60% for 2040.

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The line graph illustrates the urban percentage in the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Overall, all figures increased, whereas Malaysia and Indonesia showed the biggest growth. The datas grew by more than 40 percent points. In contrast, the Philippines had the smallest rise from 32% to 52%.

Despite starting with 30% in 1970 Malaysia saw an upwards trend to its peak at more than 80% in 2040, showing the highest data. Indonesia had a similar trend, the urban percentage grew from approximately 14% initially to 58% in 2040.

Turning to the other Asian counties, the percentage of the Philippines population living in cities was 32%, showing the largest percentage. Although the rise did not be as substantial as others, the data grew to its peak at 52% in 2040. As for Thailand, the figure was about 18% and it grew to its peak at 45% in 2040, increased by almost 3 times.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percentage: 4

philippines: 3

malaysia: 3

indonesia: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and providing a clear overview of the data. It covers all four countries and includes both historical data and future predictions. To improve, ensure that the comparison between countries is more nuanced; for example, noting when certain lines intersect. Additionally, be careful with grammatical accuracy (e.g., 'the datas' is incorrect as 'data' is uncountable, and 'did not be' should be 'was not') to ensure the clarity of the mathematical comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized into logical paragraphs, and the progression of ideas is generally easy to follow. However, the cohesion could be improved by using a wider variety of linking words and cohesive devices. Some transitions between sentences feel a bit abrupt. To improve, try to use more sophisticated linking phrases (e.g., 'Regarding the remaining two countries,' or 'In terms of Thailand,') to create a smoother flow between different segments of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing trends, but there is some repetition and misuse of terms. For instance, 'the datas' is incorrect as 'data' is an uncountable noun in this context, and 'the highest data' is an unnatural phrasing. Additionally, using 'percent points' is a good attempt at precision, but ensure it is used correctly. To reach a higher band, aim for more varied synonyms for 'increase' (e.g., 'surged', 'climbed', 'escalated') and 'show' (e.g., 'depict', 'reveal', 'exhibit'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that occasionally hinder the clarity of the report. For example, 'the rise did not be as substantial' is grammatically incorrect (it should be 'the rise was not as substantial'). There are also issues with punctuation, such as missing commas after introductory phrases (e.g., 'Despite starting with 30% in 1970, Malaysia...'). To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, the correct use of the verb 'to be' in negative constructions, and the proper use of commas to separate clauses.

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