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Band 7+: The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.

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The image shows leisure activities participation percentages for boys and girls aged 5-14. For skateboarding or rollerblading, boys are at 35% and girls at 25%. For bike riding, boys are at 70% and girls at 60%. For watching TV or videos, boys are at 100% and girls at 100%. For electronic or computer games, boys are at 80% and girls at 60%. For art and craft, boys are at 35% and girls at 60%.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of Australian children who like to do five different activities in their free time.

In general, Watching TV or videos was the most popular activity for both genders. In addtion, it is clearly apparent thay boys recorded higher participation rates in Electronic or computer games, Bike riding and Skateboarding or rollerblading, while girls were more involved in Art and Craft.

Regarding the most common activities, Watching TV or videos recorded equal proportions of 100% for both Australian boys and girls. Electronic or Computer games are much more preferred by boys than by girls, with respective figures being around 82% and nearly 60%. Similarly, Bike riding also attracted more boys than more girls. About 75% of boys, while the figure for girls was lower, at approximately 57%.

Around 38% of 5-14-year-old boys enjoy Skateboarding or rollerblading, whereas the percentage of girls at this age is only about 25%. In contrast, Art and Craft represented the only category that girls outnumbered boys, with nearly 58% of females taking part, compared to only about 35% of males.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report fully satisfies the task requirements. It provides a clear overview and accurately describes the key features of the chart, comparing boys and girls across all five activities. The data is presented logically and cohesively, with appropriate use of cohesive devices and a wide range of vocabulary. Minor numerical approximations do not detract from the overall quality. The response is well-structured and demonstrates a strong command of academic writing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear introduction, overall trend, and detailed body paragraphs. Cohesion is generally smooth, with effective use of linking words and pronouns. However, there are minor lapses: a few typographical errors (e.g., 'addtion' for 'addition', 'thay' for 'that') and a slightly awkward sentence ('Bike riding also attracted more boys than more girls') that momentarily disrupt the flow. These are minor and do not significantly hinder understanding. To improve, proofread carefully to eliminate such errors and refine sentence structures for greater clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is varied and appropriate, with good use of synonyms and descriptive phrases (e.g., 'recorded higher participation rates', 'outnumbered'). However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'recorded' used twice) and a few imprecise word choices (e.g., 'more boys than more girls'). To achieve a higher band, aim for more sophisticated and precise lexical choices, and avoid repetitive phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and comparative forms. However, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect accuracy: 'more boys than more girls' is incorrect; 'About 75% of boys, while the figure for girls was lower' is a fragment; and there are minor punctuation issues. These errors are noticeable but do not impede overall comprehension. To improve, focus on sentence construction and proofreading to eliminate such mistakes.

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