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Band 8+: The graph below gives information on the fluctuation in domestic gasoline and oil prices in VietNam from Jan 4, 2024 to Aug 1, 2024

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The image depicts fluctuating prices of RON 95 gasoline and diesel oil in Vietnam from January 4, 2024, to August 1, 2024: RON 95 gasoline prices start at approximately 22,000, peak at around 25,800 on March 13, 2024, fluctuate and drop to about 21,400 on August 1, 2024; Diesel oil begins just above 21,000, rises to a maximum of about 23,200 on February 11, 2024, declines steadily reaching around 18,200 on August 1, 2024.

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The line graph compares the selling prices of RON 95 gasoline and diesel oil in Viet Nam between January and August 2024.

Overall, it is clear that the prices of RON 95 gasoline and diesel oil shared the same pattern. In addition, RON 95 gasoline was more expensive than diesel oil throughout the period.

According to the line graph, the price of RON 95 gasoline stood at 22,000 VND per litre on January 4th, then this figure slightly increased by 2,000 VND per litre on February 29. In the next 2 months, the selling price of RON 95 gasoline witnessed a gradual fluctuation and reached its peak at about 25,200 VND per litre on April 18th. After that, the price of RON95 sharply fell to 22,000 VND per litre on June 6th before rising again to 23,500 VND per litre on July 4th. Finally, the retail price of RON 95 showed a remarkable decline to roughly 21,900 per litre at the end of the period.

Regarding the remaining fuel, the price of diesel oil experienced the same pattern as RON 95 gasoline, but the figure for diesel oil had a lower retail price than RON 95 gasoline. On January 4th, the price of diesel was nearly 19,800 VND per litre and rose substantially to about 21,700 VND per litre on the first day of February. After 2 months, this figure slightly fluctuated, then peaked at about 21,900 VND per litre on April 11th. However, the price of diesel oil dropped considerably to its lowest point around 19,400 VND per litre on June 6th. Afterwards, the price grew to nearly 21,200 VND per litre on the fourth day of July before declining steadily again, finishing the period at about 19,200 VND per litre

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

litre: 12

price: 9

gasoline: 7

diesel: 7

about: 4

january: 3

figure: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and detailed comparisons of the two fuel prices. The overall trend is clearly described, and the data is presented in a logical structure. However, there are some inaccuracies in the specific data points (e.g., peak values and dates) and a few omissions (e.g., the exact peak for RON 95 and the final value for diesel). To improve, ensure that all key data points are accurately reported and consider including a more precise summary of the overall trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: an introduction, an overview, and two detailed paragraphs for each fuel type. The use of cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'According to the line graph', 'Regarding the remaining fuel') helps the reader follow the progression smoothly. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'In the next 2 months' which could be more precise, and the transition between the two detailed paragraphs could be slightly smoother. Overall, the message is easy to follow and paragraphing is managed well.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'fluctuation', 'witnessed a gradual fluctuation', 'sharply fell', 'remarkable decline', and 'declining steadily'. The language is generally accurate and natural, with some sophisticated control (e.g., 'shared the same pattern', 'experienced the same pattern'). There is a minor repetition of phrases like 'the price of' and 'per litre', but this does not detract significantly. To reach a higher band, consider using more varied synonyms and more precise expressions to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a wide range of grammatical structures with good control. Sentences are mostly complex and correctly punctuated. There are no significant grammar errors, and the report is accurate throughout. Minor improvements could be made in sentence variety, as some sentences follow a similar pattern (e.g., 'the price of X stood at...', 'the price of X rose to...'). Overall, the grammar is strong and does not impede understanding.

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