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The image displays a line graph titled "Precious metals price history" depicting the average closing prices of gold, platinum, and palladium from 2013 to 2021, with prices ranging from $500 to $3000 per ounce. Gold prices steadily increased from around $1200 in 2013 to over $1800 in 2021, with a brief dip in 2015. Platinum prices fluctuated between $1000 and $1500, peaking in 2014 and 2016 before declining to around $1000 in 2021. Palladium prices experienced the most significant growth, starting at $500 in 2013, peaking at almost $3000 in 2020, and ending at around $2500 in 2021.

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The line graph illustrates the average culminating price of three metal categories between 2013 and 2021.

Overall, the Palladium metal showed the most significant increased in its price over the eight year period, while the platinium experienced the gradual decline in its price.

At first, Palladium worthed less, than the two category at around 700 dollar per oz, then experienced a substantial fluctuation until 2018. It then, peaked at approximately $2200 per oz in 2020, and culminated to reach nearly $2500 by the end period. The Platinium price was exactly at $1500 in 2013, before a sudden declined in 2015 at 1000 dollars. This figure remained relatively stable, despite some minimal fluctuations over the following year.

On the other hand, the Gold price in 2013 was close to $1500; thereafter, it witnessed some fluctuation, and plateaued well by 2019, followed by a surged at $1700 in 2020, which remained same by 2021.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is correctly identified for palladium, but the description of platinum and gold contains errors (e.g., platinum's starting price and trend, gold's plateau and surge). Some data points are imprecise (e.g., palladium's starting price, peak values). The report would benefit from clearer organization and more accurate data presentation. Additionally, there are minor grammatical and lexical issues that slightly affect clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'the two category' and 'the end period' are vague, and the use of 'At first' and 'On the other hand' is not always logical. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single metal or a clear comparison. Also, use a range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'subsequently') to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'fluctuation', 'peaked', 'culminated', 'plateaued'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings. For instance, 'average culminating price' is not a natural collocation, 'worthed' is incorrect, and 'the Platinium' and 'the Gold' are misused. To improve, use precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'average closing price', 'experienced a rise', 'remained stable') and ensure correct spelling and article usage. Avoid overusing 'the' before metal names.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'showed the most significant increased' (should be 'increase'), 'worthed' (should be 'was worth'), 'less, than' (comma misuse), 'a sudden declined' (should be 'a sudden decline'), and 'a surged' (should be 'a surge'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, with some missing commas and incorrect use of semicolons. To improve, review subject-verb agreement, noun forms, and article usage. Practice writing more complex sentences with accurate grammar and punctuation.

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