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Band 5+: The graph below shows the changes in population in three cities (A, B, and C) between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Population Growth in 3 Cities (2000-2020)", with the x-axis showing years (2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, 2020) and the y-axis showing Population in Millions (from 0 to 6). City A's population in millions was: 2.0 in 2000, 3.0 in 2005, 4.0 in 2010, 4.8 in 2015, and 5.0 in 2020. City B's population in millions was: 4.0 in 2000, 4.1 in 2005, 4.2 in 2010, 4.3 in 2015, and 4.5 in 2020. City C's population in millions was: 3.0 in 2000, 2.9 in 2005, 2.8 in 2010, 2.7 in 2015, and 2.5 in 2020.

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The line chart illustrates how changed population in three different cities from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, at the beganning, city B had the highest number of citizens, while city A was the lowest figure. City C lost population throughout period. From 2015, city A became the leader in that graph.

In 2000, city B had 4 million. In following 5 years, city B increased to 100 thousand and stability rose to 4.2 million in 2015; then acieved 4.5 million in 2020. City C was on 2 place with 3 million in 2000, then started consistently fell a little bit year after years. The biggest downroad happened from 2015 to 2020, in this period population of city decreased to 300 thousands and reached 2.5 million.

By 2000, city A had only 2 million, it was half as many than city B. In 2005, the number of citizens in city A sharply increased to 1 million and almost leveled off with city C. By 2015, city A climbed to the first place on this top with 4.8 million. After 5 years, city A reached 5 million.

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population: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and attempts to provide a comparison between the three cities. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity that hinder the overall achievement of the task. Specifically, some numerical descriptions are confusing or mathematically incorrect (e.g., stating a population increased 'to 100 thousand' or that a decrease resulted in '300 thousands' when the context implies millions). To improve, ensure that all data points are reported accurately according to the scale provided and focus on using precise mathematical language to describe changes (e.g., 'increased by' vs 'increased to'). Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy to ensure the relationship between the numbers and the subjects is clear.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and imprecise transitions. To improve, ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next using appropriate cohesive devices. Avoid using informal or imprecise terms like 'the leader in that graph' or 'on this top'; instead, use more academic phrases such as 'the most populous city' or 'the highest figure'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and contains several inaccuracies that impede clarity. For example, terms like 'stability rose', 'downroad', and 'on 2 place' are not standard English and make the report difficult to follow. There are also issues with word formation (e.g., 'beganning'). To improve, focus on learning precise academic collocations for describing trends, such as 'experienced a steady increase', 'witnessed a decline', or 'reached a peak'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the report, particularly regarding verb tenses, prepositions, and sentence structure. For instance, 'how changed population' and 'started consistently fell' are grammatically incorrect. Additionally, there are errors in comparative structures (e.g., 'half as many than'). To improve, practice using complex sentence structures and pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of past tense when describing historical data.

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