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Band 4+: The graph below shows the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown in the diagrams below.

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The image shows a bar chart with average height in cm for different fertilizers: Granny's Bloomers 27 cm, Job's House Plant Spikers 18 cm, Miracle Gro 8 cm, K Mark Fertilizer 22 cm, No fertilizer 12 cm.

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The graph representing the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth in diagrams. it shows that the brand named Granny’s Bloomers has the highest effect on the height of the bean plants and also the brand of K Mark fertilizer has a close result as the first mentioned one .

with a low results we noticed that the brand of Job’s house plant spikers where the height of the bean plant was refering to 15 cm wich is this valeur is close to the plants that was not trated with any fertilizer.

in conclusion theres also the brand of Miracle Gro with the least result that mentioned in this diagram

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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brand: 4

plant: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the main trends in the graph, noting the highest and lowest performing fertilizers. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the height for Job's House Plant Spikers is stated as 15 cm when it is actually 18 cm). The organization is basic, and the language contains errors. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and using more precise language. Also, aim for a clearer structure with a more developed overview and conclusion. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear paragraphing and transitions, making it difficult to follow the information. The ideas are not well-organized, and the connections between sentences are weak. Consider using more cohesive devices and organizing the information into distinct paragraphs to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of synonyms or more sophisticated language to describe the data. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to plant growth and fertilizer effects to enhance the report's descriptive quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to enhance the overall quality of the report.

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