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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of appliances sold in an electronic store in Ghana from 1965 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph illustrating appliance sales numbers in an electronic store in Ghana from 1965 to 2000; refrigerators: 1965-100, 1970-300, 1975-500, 1980-600, 1985-700, 1990-600, 1995-900, 2000-800; washing machines: 1965-700, 1970-500, 1975-400, 1980-500, 1985-600, 1990-400, 1995-350, 2000-300; telephones: 1965-100, 1970-100, 1975-200, 1980-300, 1985-400, 1990-500, 1995-600, 2000-700; televisions: 1965-200, 1970-300, 1975-300, 1980-400, 1985-500, 1990-600, 1995-500, 2000-500.

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The line graph illustrates the number of electronic appliances, namely refrigerators, washing machines, telephones, and television, sold in a Ghanaian electronic store between 1965 and 2000.

Overall it is clear that the sales of all appliances increased gradually, except for telephones. Refrigerators accounted for the biggest figure.

Refrigerators accounted for the largest figure, starting at 700 in 1965 and fluctuating considerably and reaching a peak of 1,000 in the following years. The second-largest seller, washing machines, began at below 400 sales from 1970 to 1975, increased slightly to 400-590, and remained stable until 1995, jumping to 650.

By contrast television was the least sold, at only 50 in 1965 and rising steadily to about 200 in 2000. 400 telephones were sold in Ghana in 1965. However it fell to 300 in 1985, showing some fluctuations, and stood at 400 in the end.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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telephones: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., refrigerators starting at 700 instead of 100, televisions at 50 instead of 200, and telephones at 400 instead of 100). The overall trend statement is also incorrect, as telephones actually increased, not decreased. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, more accurate data reporting, and a more precise overview of the main features. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction and overview. However, the body paragraphs could be more coherently structured, and the use of cohesive devices is somewhat limited. Consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly varied or sophisticated. There is some repetition of words like 'sales' and 'figure'. To improve, use synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'purchases', 'units sold', 'trend', 'peak', 'decline'). Also, ensure correct usage of terms like 'fluctuating' and 'stable'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate with a few minor errors (e.g., 'television' should be 'televisions', and some sentence structures are awkward). The range of structures is limited; try to include more complex sentences and varied punctuation to demonstrate full flexibility.

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