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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email and in person from January 2001 to June 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph of enquiries to a tourist information office from January to June 2001 by three methods: in person, by telephone, and by email/letter. January figures: in person 450, by telephone 900, by email/letter 750; February: in person 600, by telephone 850, by email/letter 700; March: in person 800, by telephone 1000, by email/letter 700; April: in person 1200, by telephone 1000, by email/letter 580; May: in person 1400, by telephone 1400, by email/letter 400; June: in person 1900, by telephone 1600, by email/letter 200.

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It is exhibited from the given line graph compares the number of enquiries made to the tourist information office through three different means of communication, in person, by telephone and letter and email, between January and June 2001.

Summarily, the data highlights with the enquiries made in person and by telephone demonstrating the substantial and consistent growth, whereas made by email and letter experienced a decline throughout the given period of five months.

At the outset, the number of enquiries made in person increased continually over the period from 400 enquiries in January to peaked at 1200 in the end of the month. In comparison, the figure of enquiries made by telephone started at 800 in January and some fluctuation, between March and April remained stable, after which telephone enquiries increased and peaked 1100 by June.

On the other hand, the amount of enquiries made by email and letter stood at approximately 600 in the beginning year and remained the same until March, but after that demonstrated a moderate decline of 200 by the end of the period.

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enquiries: 7

telephone: 4

person: 3

letter: 3

email: 3

january: 3

period: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and key trends, with relevant comparisons between the three enquiry methods. The data is generally accurate, though some figures are slightly off (e.g., starting values and peak values). The structure is clear, with an introduction, summary, and detailed paragraphs. To improve, ensure all data points are precisely reported and avoid minor inaccuracies. Additionally, use more varied and precise vocabulary to describe trends, and ensure grammatical accuracy in phrases like 'peaked at 1200 in the end of the month' (should be 'at the end of the period'). Overall, the response is well-organized and covers the main features appropriately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the data highlights with the enquiries made in person and by telephone demonstrating...'). The overview could be more concise and better integrated. Paragraphing is present but could be more skillfully managed to separate trends more clearly. Work on using cohesive devices more naturally to improve the logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

There is a reasonable range of vocabulary, with some appropriate terms like 'demonstrating substantial and consistent growth' and 'experienced a decline.' However, there are instances of imprecise word choices and awkward collocations (e.g., 'It is exhibited from the given line graph compares...', 'the amount of enquiries made by email and letter stood at approximately 600 in the beginning year'). To improve, use more precise and natural vocabulary, and avoid literal translations. Also, ensure that terms like 'peaked' and 'fluctuation' are used accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'It is exhibited from the given line graph compares...' is grammatically incorrect; 'the data highlights with the enquiries...' is awkward; and 'some fluctuation, between March and April remained stable' is missing a verb. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, focus on sentence structure, ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb, and proofread for punctuation and grammatical accuracy.

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