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Band 4+: the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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The image shows a line graph with two sets of data. The first one, represented with a solid line, shows the number of shop closures from 2011 to 2018, with the values ranging between 2000 and 10000. The second set, represented with a dashed line, shows the number of shop openings for the same period, with values also ranging between 2000 and 10000.

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The lline graph described the figures of the closures and the new shops openings from 2011 to 2018.

According to the graph, There was a huge number of new shop, which reached 8500 point in 2011.. In 2012, the opening of shop down Sharply to appoxiamatay 4000. but from 2013 to 2014, the number ne stops gradually increased to 6200 and the figure remained the same in 2015, 2016, and 2017 and declined Sizbly to 3000 in 2018

The total number of shops that Closed from 2011 to 2012, it still remaining the same at 6000. In 2013, the figure of shop closures reached the highest point of 7,200. .The shop closures declined to 1000 in 2015, but it increased quickly to 5,000 in 2016 and remain almost contants in 2018.

Overall, The number of new open shops that dramatically decrease more that than the total of the shop country should have situation. Closures , tackle this situation

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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shops: 3

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by describing the data on shop closures and openings between 2011 and 2018. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report lacks coherence and cohesion due to the disorganized structure of the information. The ideas are not presented in a logical sequence, affecting the overall flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasing throughout the report. More precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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While a variety of grammatical structures are attempted, there are numerous errors in grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. Improvements in accuracy are needed for a higher score.

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