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Band 4+: The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting 4 places between 2017 and 2020 and the predicted numbers from 2021-2022. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph detailing the number of tourists (in 1000s) from 2017 to 2022 for Wakeland, Bronks City, Trinity, and Yellow Brook. Wakeland's values are: 2017 - 40, 2018 - 45, 2019 - 18, 2020 - 29, 2021-2022 - 40. Bronks City's values are: 2017 - 38, 2018 - 43, 2019 - 12, 2020 - 22, 2021-2022 - 28. Trinity's values are: 2017 - 22, 2018 - 28, 2019 - 35, 2020 - 35, 2021-2022 - 36. Yellow Brook's values are: 2017 - 37, 2018 - 48, 2019 - 1, 2020 - 22, 2021-2022 - 14.

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The graphic illustrates the number of tourists vistiting four different places – Wakeland, Bronks City, Trinity and Yellow Brook between 2017 and 2020 and prediction numbers for year 2021-2022. The figure was measured in 1000s.

Overall, it is evident that Trinity has shown sustantial slightly upward trend, while Yellow Brook underwent consequences level of the figure. However, the figure for Wakeland and Bronks City showed fluctuation before generating remarkably increase at the end of period.

In 2017, Yellow Brook have been accounted the largest proportation of the figure, approximately 45,000 seconds, visually showed fluctuation before falling dramatically, allocated lowest at 10,000s. Followed by Wakeland at around roughly 43,000s, showing similar graph before gaining upward trend, ending with 40,000s

Similar pattern accounted by Bronks City, visual downward line in 2019 approximately at 25,000s, brfore predecting and peaking tourism to allocating around 28,000s at the end of the 2021-2022, However, Trinity place significantly maintain its rate of tourism and showed upward trend peaking its all time roughly 22,000s, further predicted generating around 30,000s.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing. The description of the data contains some errors. For example, the numbers quoted in the third paragraph are not correct. The language is not always clear and natural. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and using more precise language.

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The report struggles with coherence and cohesion. The organization of information is not always logical, and the transitions between sentences and ideas are often abrupt. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively group related information. The overall flow of the report needs significant improvement to ensure the reader can easily follow the information presented. For example, the relationships between the trends of different locations are not clearly established, and the summary lacks a clear structure.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure are prevalent. For example, 'Yellow Brook have been accounted' and 'brfore predecting and peaking tourism to allocating around 28,000s' demonstrate significant grammatical issues. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules to enhance the accuracy and clarity of your writing. Proofreading carefully and seeking feedback on your grammar can be beneficial.

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