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Band 4+: The graph below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in five European countries, from 2000 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph tracking female parliamentary membership percentages from 2000 to 2012 in five European countries: Germany, Spain, Belgium, the UK, and Italy. In 2000, Germany started at approximately 32%, Spain at around 25%, Belgium nearly 12%, and Italy and the UK at roughly 3% each. By 2004, Germany increased to 34% and Spain rose slightly above 30%, while Belgium reached 15%. Italy had an increase to 9%, and the UK saw a minimal change. By 2008, Germany's percentage slightly rose to 35%, Spain and Belgium leveled off, Italy had a sharp increase to 23%, and the UK started a gradual rise. In 2012, Germany approached 37%, Spain hovered around 36%, Belgium neared 20%, the UK climbed to 25%, and Italy remained stable at 24%.

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The given graph illustrate the proportion of female members of parlament in five different Europian countries between 2000 and 2012.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that over the period from 2000 to 2012, percentage of female members of parlament in Belgium and Germany almost did not changed. Hovewer, rate of female members in Spain and UK increased slightly, while female members propotion rose substantially.

According to the graph, Italy’s female members of parlament remained stable during the period of 4-year between 2000 and 2004. Afterward, it rapidly increased from just over 3% in 2004 to above 24% in 2008, the levelled off by 2012. Hovewer, persentage of female members in United Kingdom stood approximately at 15.

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The report addresses the task by describing the overall trends and some specific data, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the UK's starting value is incorrectly stated as 15% (it was about 3%), and the description of the UK's trend is incomplete. Additionally, the report omits key details for Germany, Spain, and Belgium, such as their specific values and trends. The overall structure is clear, but the language contains errors (e.g., 'parlament', 'Europian', 'Hovewer', 'propotion') that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include all countries' main features, and proofread for spelling and grammatical accuracy. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Hovewer' instead of 'However'), which makes the message harder to follow. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the second paragraph combines multiple ideas without clear separation. To improve, focus on using a wider range of linking words accurately and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variation (e.g., 'proportion', 'remained stable', 'increased slightly', 'rose substantially'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'parlament', 'Europian', 'persentage', 'propotion') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'rate of female members' instead of 'the percentage of female members'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct spelling and collocations (e.g., 'the percentage of female MPs' or 'female parliamentary representation').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. There are subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'graph illustrate' should be 'graph illustrates'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'did not changed' should be 'did not change'), and misuse of articles and prepositions. The range of sentence structures is limited, with most sentences being simple or compound. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., subordinate clauses) and review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Punctuation is also inconsistent, with missing commas and incorrect capitalization.

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