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Band 6+: The graph below shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features in Vietnam in the year 2005, 2008, 2010.

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The image displays a table detailing Vietnamese mobile phone feature usage percentages over 2005, 2008, and 2010. "Make calls" were 100% in 2005 and 2008, declining to 97% by 2010. "Take photos" usage increased from 65% in 2005 to 70% in 2008, reaching 77% in 2010. "Send & Receive text messages" showed a decrease from 82% in 2005 to 73% in 2008 and 68% in 2010. "Record audio" usage dropped from 78% in 2005 to 75% in 2008 and further to 63% in 2010.

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The table compares four different phone features in terms of percentage they are used for each feature by the owner in Vietnam in 2005, 2008, and 2010. Overall, it’s clear that three out of four cell phone features on the table experienced varying levels of increase in the percentage of mobile phone owners using various its features. We can also see that making calls is commonly used in each year shown.

In 2005 and 2008, starting at just 100% percentage of making calls slightly decreased to almost 97%. The second common feature was sending and receiving messages. It slightly dropped from 82% to 73%, and this was followed by a slight decline by 5% to 68% from 74% in 2008 and 2010.

While using taking photos, the features of phones exhibited minor rise from 65 to 70%. Record audio showed a marginal decline from 78 to 75, and then this figure reached just 63 in the final. Taking photos experienced a modest rise from 70% in 2008 to 77% in 2010.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

features: 4

phone: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the features across the three years. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'starting at just 100% percentage' and 'from 74% in 2008' which is incorrect). The overview could be more precise, as it states 'three out of four features experienced increases,' but in fact, only 'take photos' increased, while the others decreased. To improve, ensure the overview accurately reflects the main trends, and refine language for clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the organization could be improved. The second paragraph mixes data for different features without clear grouping, and the third paragraph is somewhat disjointed. Use clearer paragraphing to separate trends for each feature or group similar trends together. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that transitions between ideas are smooth.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range. There is some repetition of words like 'slightly' and 'decline'. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'gradually', 'marginally', 'experienced a fall', 'witnessed a rise'). Also, avoid informal or awkward phrasing such as 'starting at just 100% percentage' and 'the features of phones exhibited minor rise'. Use more natural collocations and ensure that terms like 'mobile phone features' are used consistently. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'in terms of percentage they are used for each feature by the owner' is unclear, and 'using various its features' is incorrect. There are also issues with articles and prepositions (e.g., 'a slight decline by 5% to 68% from 74%' should be 'a slight decline of 5% to 68% from 73%'). To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, use correct prepositions, and ensure that sentences are grammatically complete and clear.

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