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The image displays a line graph depicting gym visitation percentages from 1984 to 2003. In 1984, one line starts at around 22%, another at approximately 20%, following one near 15%, and another close to 5%. By 1989, these lines shift to roughly 35%, 30%, 25%, and 8% respectively. In 1994, the numbers adjust to about 40%, 32%, 22%, and 10%. Come 1999, values change to approximately 55%, 37%, 19%, and 10%, concluding in 2003 at about 69%, 32%, 18%, and 10%.

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The given graph illustrates the number of people who visited gym monthly in percents from 1984 to 2003 between different age groups.

Overall, three of four groups demonstrated an increase, while people between 46 and 65 showed a decline.

Young adults between 18 and 25 demonstrated a continuous upward trend thoughout the given period, starting at around 15%, then steadily growing until 1994, followed by a sharp rise in 1999, hitting the highest point in the fibal year (approximately 65%). The next group was adults between 26-45; at the beginning it had the highest percentage among the other groups, started at 30%, then experienced irregular changes until 1994, then it witnessed a steady growth, reaching around 55%.

The figure for people who were older 46, fell signficantly throughout the period; started at around 45%, then in 2003 hit the bottom at approximately 15%. Finally, elderly people who were older 65, had less people visiting gym initially, however, over time the percentage rose to less than 20%.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and providing some data, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is correctly identified, but the specific values and age group labels are not aligned with the visual description. For instance, the starting values and final figures for the age groups are incorrect, and the age groups are not clearly defined in the report. Additionally, the report omits some key data points and includes some irrelevant or inaccurate information, such as the decline for the 46-65 group, which is not supported by the visual description. To improve, ensure that the data is accurately reported and that all age groups are clearly identified and described with correct values. Focus on presenting the key features and making comparisons where relevant, while avoiding unsupported claims.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for different age groups. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'the next group was adults between 26-45') and abrupt transitions. The final paragraph mixes two age groups without clear separation, which affects coherence. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on one main idea. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'upward trend', 'steadily growing', 'sharp rise', 'steady growth', 'decline', 'hit the bottom'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'visited gym monthly in percents', 'had less people visiting gym initially', 'people who were older 46'). To improve, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'the percentage of people who visited the gym at least once a month', 'individuals aged 46 and over'). Also, avoid informal expressions like 'hit the bottom' in academic writing; use 'reached its lowest point' instead.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include: 'in percents' should be 'as a percentage', 'thoughout' should be 'throughout', 'fibal' should be 'final', 'signficantly' should be 'significantly', and 'older 46' should be 'aged over 46'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure (e.g., 'had less people' should be 'had fewer people'). To improve, proofread carefully and use a wider range of complex structures with accurate grammar. Practice using past tense consistently and ensure correct word forms.

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