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Band 6+: The graph below shows the percentage (PPM) of air pollution sources in 3 different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image presents a bar graph with the percentage (PPM) of air pollution sources across three countries: China, India, and Vietnam, categorized into Manufacturing, Transport, Household, and Agriculture pollutants; China shows Manufacturing at 14%, Transport at 60%, Household at 6%, Agriculture at 20%; India displays Manufacturing at 23%, Transport at 58%, Household at 5%, Agriculture at 14%; Vietnam highlights Manufacturing at 28%, Transport at 40%, Household at 10%, Agriculture at 22%.

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The bar chart illustrates the relative percentage disturbution of air pollution sources in China, India and Vietnam.

Overall, thre is a different redistribution of sources in these countries. The most widespread cause of air pollution is transport in China, whereas the most stable among three countries is agriculture.

The most striking change is that in India transport affects the air almost 4 times less than in China (14% and 60% respectively), while in Vietnam (40%) transportation pollutes the air approximateely 2 times more that in India (14%). Moreover, these cause is the most powerful in both counties (China and Vietnam), and the percentage difference between them is 20%.

The next essential change that agriculture always be in the same range. To add, this distribution always be in top-3 or top-2. For example, in Vietnam this figure is 22%, which is 1 percent more than in India (23%) and 2 percent less than in China (20%).

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The report identifies some key features and makes some comparisons, but there are inaccuracies and a lack of clarity in the data representation. The organization could be improved for better coherence. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting and focus on the most significant trends and differences. Also, enhance the clarity of your comparisons and overall structure.

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The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction and overview are present, but the connections between sentences and paragraphs are not always clear, leading to some choppiness. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and improve the overall flow. Paragraphing could be more effective by grouping related information together more logically.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the data, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise. For example, 'redistribution' and 'stable' are not the most accurate descriptors in the overview. Expanding your vocabulary related to comparisons and trends would enhance the report. Also, be careful with spelling ('approximateely').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are present and affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tense ('always be'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('these cause is the most powerful'). Focus on improving grammatical accuracy by reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully. Pay attention to sentence structure and ensure that your sentences are clear and concise.

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