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Band 4+: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

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The image displays a line graph comparing the unemployment rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999. The US rate starts at 7%, declines to 4.5% by March 1995, then fluctuates slightly before reaching 4% in March 1999. Japan's rate begins at 2.5%, rises steadily to 4.5% by March 1998, and then increases sharply to 5% in March 1999.

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The line chart compared the percentages of employees who worked in both of countries Japan and the US between March 1993 and March 1999

Overall, the highest percentage of employers had worked in the US in 1993 , while the percentages of employers worked were lowest in Japan in the same year.

In terms of the US employers, March 1993 to March 1995 it decreased. Employers were worked stable after two years. From 1996 to end of the chart employers worked were decreased studly

For the remaining years, Japanese employers work increased slowly four years from March 1993 to March 1996. There were significant fluctuations in employers over the period between March 1996 and March 1998. And after that the figure increased rapidly from 1998 to 1999

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march: 8

employers: 7

worked: 5

years: 3

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The report attempts to describe the trends in the line graph but contains inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The language used is imprecise, and there are issues with grammar and vocabulary. The report would benefit from more accurate data referencing and a clearer description of the trends, using more precise language and avoiding repetition. Also, the report misinterprets the graph as showing percentages of employers rather than unemployment rates. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related ideas. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive ('employers worked'). There are inaccuracies in word choice that affect clarity. Expand your vocabulary related to trends and comparisons to improve precision. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence structure.

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