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Band 7+: The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Gym Membership" with two lines representing "men" in blue and "women" in orange, measured on a vertical axis from 0 to 6000 and a horizontal axis from 1980 to 2010. Men's line starts at approximately 1000, peaks around 5000 in 1985, dips to 2000 in 1995, and peaks again at nearly 6000 in 2005 before falling. Women's line begins just above 1000, gradually rises to around 3000 in 2005, then declines.

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The following report presents information on male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.

Overall, this graph shows that men had a higher rate of having a gym membership than women. Between the years 1990 and 2000, it can be seen that women’s gym membership took first place from men’s gym membership. After about 2005-2010, this same dynamic continued.

Specifically, men’s gym membership had its peak in 2005 with a rate of 5000. Starting from 1980, it had a rather linear increase, and during 1985, that increase let its place become stable. After about 1987, it started to decrease dramatically and once again continued a stable path until 2000. It had its dip at the end of the 2010s with a number less than 1000.

In contrast, women’s gym membership had rather uncertain and several dips and peaks compared to men’s. The highest rate belonging to women is near 3000 in 1995, and the lowest is about 1000 in 1980.

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membership: 6

men's: 3

about: 3

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Task Response

7.5

The report adequately addresses the task, providing a clear overview of the graph and highlighting the main trends. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the incorrect statement that women's gym membership took first place from men's between 1990 and 2000.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow, but there are some issues with cohesion. The transitions between paragraphs could be smoother, and some sentences are a bit unclear or wordy.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of repetition and simplicity. More precise and nuanced vocabulary could be used to describe the trends and patterns in the graph.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of sentence structures, but there are some errors in grammar and punctuation. For example, there are some issues with verb tense consistency and article usage.

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