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Band 6+: The graph provides information about the increase in population in urban of five Asian countries Japan Thailand, Pakistan, India and Bangladesh in the time period of 1960 , 2010 and 2050.

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The image presents a bar graph showcasing urban population percentages from five countries in three distinct years: Japan with 1960 at 60%, 2010 at 80%, and 2050 at 90%; Thailand with 1960 at 20%, 2010 at 45%, and 2050 at 60%; Pakistan with 1960 at 50%, 2010 at 70%, and 2050 at 75%; India with 1960 at 40%, 2010 at 50%, and 2050 at 55%; Bangladesh with 1960 at 5%, 2010 at 25%, and 2050 at 40%.

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The provided bar chart illustrates the growth of the populace in cities of five Asian states, namely Japan, Thailand, Pakistan, India and Bangladesh in the years of 1960, 2010 and 2050.

Overall, between 1960 and 2050 the urban areas will experience a considerable increase in population, with Bangladesh will become a leader in populace growth. In contrast, Japan will remaine a state with the least boost in the amount of people, residing in urban areas.

As seen from the bar chart, the most significant upwarding trends show Japan and Thailand: the figures of individuals living in cities in 2050 will triple. In contrast, the amount of people in Bangladesh will marginally grow up to reach a high of 90%.

Simultaneously, in 2010 it was the most exponential increase in populace of urban areas in all Asian countries over the whole period. While Japan and Thailand rose from 12% and 15% to 40% and 45%, respectively between 1960 and 2010, Bangladesh experienced less considerable increase, growing from 65% to 80%.

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bangladesh: 4

populace: 3

urban: 3

increase: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general trends and some specific data points. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Bangladesh's figures are misstated, and the description of Japan and Thailand's growth as tripling is not supported by the data). The report also includes some irrelevant or confusing statements (e.g., 'Bangladesh will become a leader in populace growth' while the data shows it has the lowest percentages). The structure is clear, but the language contains errors and imprecise vocabulary. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the visual, avoid making unsupported claims, and ensure that comparisons and trends are correctly described.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview paragraph. However, the progression of ideas is somewhat disrupted by unclear references and a lack of logical flow in the details. For example, the second paragraph mentions Bangladesh as a leader in growth but then contradicts this with data in the third paragraph. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, which affects the smoothness of the text. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that transitions between sentences and paragraphs are logical and consistent.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variation (e.g., 'populace', 'boost', 'upwarding trends'). However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'upwarding trends' and 'marginally grow up to reach a high of 90%'. The word 'populace' is used repeatedly and may not be the most precise term for 'urban population'. To improve, focus on using more natural and accurate collocations (e.g., 'upward trend', 'increase significantly') and avoid overusing less common words. A wider range of precise vocabulary related to data description would also enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and issues with sentence structure. For instance, 'Bangladesh will become a leader in populace growth' is a fragment, and 'will remaine' is a spelling error. The sentence 'the most significant upwarding trends show Japan and Thailand' is grammatically unclear. There are also problems with tense consistency, as the report mixes future and past tenses inappropriately. To improve, work on subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms, and ensure that tenses are used consistently. Using a wider range of complex structures, such as relative clauses and conditional sentences, would also demonstrate greater grammatical control.

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