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Band 6+: The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1970 to 2000, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph tracking three categories from 1970 to 2000. For Price of color TV, the values are: 1980 (100), 1990 (approximately 55), and 2000 (approximately 48). For Price of black and white TV, the values are: 1970 (110), 1980 (40), 1990 (approximately 28), and 2000 (approximately 21). For Salary, the values are: 1970 (approximately 18), 1980 (approximately 21), 1990 (approximately 28), and 2000 (approximately 68).

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The line chart illustrates the Japanese monthly income, measured in Yen , alongs with the prices of color TV, black and white TV from 1970 to 2000.

Overall, while the cost of both two kinds of TV decreased significantly by 2000, people earned much more money compared to its in the previous period.

Regarding to two categories following the upward trend, people had to pay the highest cost, at precisely 110, in 1970 before it was decreasingly widespread after that, at 20. Similarly, the cost of color TV followed the drammatical downward trend to nearly 50 Yen after costing 100 Yen in 1980

According to the other feature, Japanese commuters had the lowest income, at about 20 Yen, in the initial year after increase slightly in the following peirod. Their income fluctuated at around 20 Yen over 20-year period before rising significantly to roughly 70 by the final year.

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The report covers the main trends and makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and the description of trends could be more precise. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately represented and use more specific language to describe changes over time. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. The flow of information is somewhat disjointed, and the transitions between different points could be smoother. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a logical progression of information. Paragraphing is adequate but could be more strategically employed to group related information effectively.

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The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are instances where word choice could be more precise and sophisticated. The use of descriptive language is somewhat limited, and there is room to incorporate a wider variety of synonyms and expressions to enhance the richness of the writing. Focus on expanding your vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and changes over time.

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The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and correct usage of articles and prepositions. While the overall meaning is generally understandable, addressing these grammatical issues would significantly improve the accuracy and fluency of the writing.

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