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Band 5+: The graph shows the percentage of visiting the cinema once a month or more between 1984 to 2003 (4 age groups). Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph from 1984 to 2004 on the vertical axis for the percentages of four age groups: 7-14, 15-24, 25-34, and 35 and over. For age group 7-14: 1984 (15%), 1989 (15.9%), 1994 (18.1%), 1999 (20.1%), 2004 (27%). For age group 15-24: 1984 (22.4%), 1989 (27.5%), 1994 (33.2%), 1999 (41.3%), 2004 (55.9%). For age group 25-34: 1984 (8.7%), 1989 (10.2%), 1994 (11.3%), 1999 (12.5%), 2004 (13.6%). For age group 35 and over: 1984 (10.5%), 1989 (14.1%), 1994 (29.5%), 1999 (33.5%), 2004 (33.6%).

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of different age groups who visited the cinema at least once a month between 1984 and 2003.

Overall, between 1984 and 2003 all 4 groups grew. 7-14 and 25-35 year people ended at the same result in 2003. The 15-24 year group significantly increased, while 35 and cover recorded the lowest result.

First of all, the percentage of children aged 7-14 was 10% in 1984, while the 25-35 was approximately 4%. Both figures climbed and in the 2000 they had reached approximately 28-30%. In 2003, they achieved 30%.

Secondly, young people aged 15-24 were approximately 18% in 1984 and the figure peaked at 57% before falling to 51% in 2003, while people aged 35 and more slightly increased from 1% to 3%. However, after 1992 these aged people showed gradually growing to 15% in 2003.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for the 7-14 and 25-34 age groups is incorrectly described, and the figures for the 35 and over group are significantly understated. The report also misstates the final values for some groups. To improve, ensure that all key data points are accurately reported and that comparisons are made clearly. Focus on presenting the main trends and notable differences without introducing incorrect figures. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. For example, 'all 4 groups grew' is vague, and 'these aged people' is confusing. The paragraphing is acceptable, but the logical progression of ideas could be improved by more explicit linking between the overview and the detailed data. To enhance coherence, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that transitions between sentences are smooth. Use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast', 'similarly', and 'while' more effectively to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'illustrates', 'significantly increased', and 'peaked'. However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices, such as '25-35 year people', '35 and cover', and 'these aged people'. The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is a lack of sophistication in describing trends (e.g., 'grew', 'climbed', 'achieved'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary for describing changes (e.g., 'rose steadily', 'experienced a sharp increase', 'remained relatively stable') and ensure correct terminology for age groups (e.g., 'those aged 35 and over'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'in the 2000' should be 'in 2000', 'they had reached' should be 'they reached', and 'before falling to 51%' is correct but the tense usage is inconsistent. There are also subject-verb agreement issues and awkward phrasing like 'these aged people showed gradually growing'. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately, such as using the past simple for completed actions and ensuring subject-verb agreement. Proofread to eliminate minor errors and improve overall accuracy.

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