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Band 7+: The graphs below show average daily time spent on personal care and the percentage of digital booking for appointment in Brazil between 2006 and 2020.

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The image displays two line graphs. The top graph, titled "Average Daily Time Spent on Personal Care in Brazil, 2005-2020", has an x-axis labeled "Year" and a y-axis labeled "Average Minutes per Day" (range 10 to 30), reporting data for four categories in 2005, 2010, 2015, and 2020: Showering/Bathing (2005: 25, 2010: 28, 2015: 30, 2020: 32), Hair Care (shampoo, styling) (2005: 15, 2010: 16, 2015: 18, 2020: 20), Grooming (shaving, makeup) (2005: 12, 2010: 11, 2015: 10, 2020: 9), and Dental Care (brushing, etc.) (2005: 8, 2010: 9, 2015: 10, 2020: 11). The bottom graph, titled "Adoption of Digital Booking for Appointments in Brazil, 2005-2020", has an x-axis labeled "Year" and a y-axis labeled "Percentage of Population" (range 0 to 70), tracking four categories across the same years: Travel/Holiday Bookings (2005: 5%, 2010: 15%, 2015: 40%, 2020: 70%), Personal Care (salons, etc.) (2005: 1%, 2010: 5%, 2015: 22%, 2020: 60%), Medical Appointments (2005: 2%, 2010: 8%, 2015: 25%, 2020: 55%), and Restaurant Reservations (2005: 0%, 2010: 3%, 2015: 18%, 2020: 50%).

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The presented line graphs illustrate the average time which was spent on personal care activities and the proportion of people who used a digital booking system for appointment in Brazil over a span of 14 years from 2006 to 2020.

Generally, all average daily time which was spent on personal care and adoption on digital booking for appointments experienced an upward trend, while grooming (exception) showed a downward trend.

At the beginning of the period, medical appointments were recorded at around 1%, followed by restaurant reservation and personal care, at 0%. These figures rose significantly to a range between 45% and 50% in 2020. However, travel/holiday bookings, which initially stood at around 5%, surged to almost 70% by the end of the period.

By comparison, showering and bathing accounted for 25%. This was then followed by a slight increase to almost 40% in 2020. Hair care and dental care began the period at 15% and 5% before rising to 18% and 10%, respectively. In contrast, grooming declined from around 12% to 7% in 2020.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and key trends for both graphs. It correctly identifies the overall upward trend and the exception of grooming. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., showering/bathing reaching 'almost 40%' instead of 32, and dental care starting at '5%' instead of 8). Additionally, the time period is stated as '2006 to 2020' while the graphs show 2005-2020. To improve, ensure data figures are accurate and align with the visual information. The structure is clear, but a more precise selection of data would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the grouping of data could be improved for better clarity. For instance, the first body paragraph mixes data from both graphs without a clear transition, and the second body paragraph focuses only on the first graph. Consider separating the discussion of the two graphs into distinct paragraphs or using clearer linking phrases to guide the reader. Additionally, the overview could be more comprehensive by explicitly mentioning both graphs and their key trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate and shows some range (e.g., 'illustrate', 'proportion', 'upward trend', 'surged', 'accounted for'). However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions. For example, 'adoption on digital booking' should be 'adoption of digital booking', and 'grooming (exception)' is awkward. Also, phrases like 'at the beginning of the period' and 'by the end of the period' are used, but more varied expressions could enhance the lexical resource. Try to use synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' and ensure precise word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including relative clauses and passive voice. However, there are several errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'the average time which was spent' could be simplified to 'the average time spent', and 'adoption on digital booking' should be 'adoption of digital booking'. Also, 'these figures rose significantly to a range between 45% and 50%' is unclear; it would be better to specify which figures. Additionally, 'showering and bathing accounted for 25%' lacks a time reference. Proofreading for subject-verb agreement and preposition use would improve accuracy.

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