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Band 5+: The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two bar charts comparing four genres—Drama, Comedy, Fantasy, and Romance—for the years 1996 and 2006. The left chart, titled 'Percentage of film released', has a y-axis labeled 'percentage' ranging from 0 to 45 in intervals of 5, reporting figures for 1996 and 2006 as follows: Drama at approximately 26% and 35%, Comedy at 20% and 25%, Fantasy at around 12% and 16%, and Romance at roughly 7% and 7%. The right chart, titled 'percentage of cinema ticket sales', has a y-axis labeled 'percentage' from 0 to 25 in increments of 5, displaying 1996 and 2006 values respectively: Drama at approximately 16% and 17%, Comedy at 20% and 23%, Fantasy at about 3% and 7%, and Romance at 5% and approximately 2%.

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The bar charts compare the percentage of film relased with the percentage of cinema ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.

Overall, Drama consistently had the highest released film category proportion, whereas Comedy dominated the ticket sales in both years. In addition, most categories saw an increase in both releases and sales, Romance decline ticket sales despite this its film release percentage stayed the same.

In terms of Drama, it accounted for around of all released films in 1996, and it risen drastic to proportion in 2006. Nevertheless, its cinema ticket sales showed gradually increased, moved from 16% to roughly 18% in 2006. As for Comedy, released films figure proportion grew from 20% to 25% in 10 years. Meanwhile Comedy saved its leader situation for ticket sales, it has a 1:5 ratio for all ticket sales in 1996. consistently its number of ticket sales increased and showen approximately 25% percentage in 2006.

For two other catagories, Fantasy also saw growth in two graphs. The percentage of Fantasy film released went up from 12% to about 16%,meanwhile its ticket sales doubled, increasing from %3 to %7. In contrast, Romance films release unchanged in two years, however its ticket sales figure dropped by half, decline from 5% to 2% in 10 years.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sales: 10

ticket: 9

percentage: 5

released: 4

years: 4

proportion: 3

comedy: 3

films: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and comparing the main features across the two charts. It correctly identifies key trends, such as Drama's high release percentage and Comedy's dominance in ticket sales, and notes the contrasting pattern for Romance. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data (e.g., Drama's release percentage in 1996 is not specified, and the exact figures for Comedy ticket sales are slightly off). Additionally, there are minor grammatical and spelling errors (e.g., 'relased', 'risen drastic', 'catagories', 'showen') that slightly affect clarity. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and some unclear references (e.g., 'it has a 1:5 ratio for all ticket sales in 1996' is confusing). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, and paragraphing could be improved by separating the discussion of Drama and Comedy from Fantasy and Romance for better clarity. Work on using a wider range of linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'accounted for', 'increased', 'decline', 'doubled'). However, there are several lexical errors and awkward choices (e.g., 'film relased', 'risen drastic', 'saved its leader situation', 'showen approximately 25% percentage'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of 'percentage' and 'ticket sales'. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'proportion', 'share', 'figure', 'experienced a rise', 'saw a decline') and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a range of sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('it risen drastic'), incorrect verb forms ('showen'), missing prepositions ('around of all released films'), and incorrect word order ('its cinema ticket sales showed gradually increased'). Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing commas after introductory phrases). To improve, focus on accurate verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of prepositions. Reviewing common grammar rules and proofreading for errors would be beneficial.

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