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Band 5+: The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a line chart detailing survey results on reasons for moving to a capital city from 2000 to 2015: employment (2000: 60000, 2005: 85000, 2010: 90000, 2015: 80000); study (2000: 10000, 2005: 15000, 2010: 20000, 2015: 30000); family/friends (2000: 40000, 2005: 50000, 2010: 60000, 2015: 80000); adventure (2000: 15000, 2005: 18000, 2010: 22000, 2015: 24000).

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The line graph shows why some people decided to move to the capital city of a particular country over a 4-year period, namely 2000, 2005, 2010 and 2010, according a survey.

Overall, there was an increasing trend in most reasons for moving to the capital city with exception of employment during the period. Particularly, moving for studying witnessed the most dramatic fall in choosing, especially in 2015, while family/friends or adventure did not much over the period.

The number of people prioritizing studying started was over 20.000 when being the second most chosen reason when moving to the capital city in 2000. After which, it experienced a significant fluctuation and reached a peak at nearly 90.000 people at the end of the period. However, it did not surpass on the reason for employment, which is the most reasons affected on the moving of people in the country over 4 years on the survey. At the beginning of the period, the figure for employment was at over 60.000, with a falling trend to under 80.000 by the end of the period.

In 2000, reasons for moving in family/friends and adventure had the same number, at about 10.000 people. Then the figure had a slight rise, with the number for family/friends being double than for adventure at the end of the period.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 5

period: 5

moving: 5

capital: 3

reasons: 3

employment: 3

family/friends: 3

adventure: 3

number: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but there are several inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data presented. For example, the years are incorrectly stated as '2000, 2005, 2010 and 2010' instead of 2015, and the figures for study and employment are misreported. The overview mentions a 'dramatic fall' for study, which is incorrect as it actually increased. Additionally, the report incorrectly states that family/friends and adventure had the same number in 2000, which is not supported by the data. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and a clear, logical structure. Focus on accurately describing trends and comparisons without introducing errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'After which' is awkward, and the connection between ideas in the second paragraph is not smooth. The paragraphing is acceptable but could be improved by more clearly separating different trends. To enhance coherence, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'witnessed the most dramatic fall' (which is incorrect as the data shows a rise), 'did not much over the period', and 'the most reasons affected on the moving'. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'experienced a steady increase', 'remained relatively stable') and avoid informal or vague expressions. Ensure that word choices accurately reflect the data trends.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include 'according a survey' (should be 'according to'), 'started was over 20.000' (incorrect verb form), and 'being double than' (should be 'twice as high as'). There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, proofread carefully and practice using a wider range of sentence structures with accurate grammar and punctuation.

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