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Band 5+: The line chart shows the proportion of the unemployed in the USA and Japan from March 1993 to 1999.

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The image displays a line graph comparing unemployment rates in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999. The US rate fluctuated between 6.0% and 7.5%, peaking in June 1994, while Japan's rate steadily increased from 2.5% to 4.5%.

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The graph bellow shows the difference between the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

As we can see, Japan started nearly 2.5 percent at the beginning of the graph. Meanwhile Americans percentage of the work force started at 7.0 percent. Then, the US unemployment had a slight leap, but after that rates fell dramatically and reached less than 5.5 percent in March 1995. After minor increasing, it continued to decrease with fluctuations. We can see a clear downward trend. Unemployment rate in US reached nearly 4.0 percent in March 1999.

However, Japan that started below 2.5 percent had an upward trend also having fluctuations. It was increasing till March 1996, but then with a slight drop from 3.5 percent to almost 3.0. After that, unemployment rates were sharply increasing, and stabilized reached 3.5 percent in March 1998. Since that time, it rose dramatically, peaked at more than 4.5 percent in March 1999.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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unemployment: 4

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reached: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The report provides a clear overview of the information presented in the graph, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data. The trends for both countries are described, but there are minor errors in the specific figures mentioned.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure and logical progression of ideas. Paragraphing is mostly effective, although some sentences could be more smoothly connected for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the report. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that slightly affect the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of complex and simple sentence structures. While there are some grammatical errors and awkward constructions, overall, the grammar is mostly accurate.

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