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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the average amount of fast food consumed per person per week in three countries between 1980 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a line graph titled "Average fast food consumption per person per week (servings), 1980–2020". The vertical y-axis is labeled "Servings per person per week" with values ranging from 0 to 10 in increments of 1, and the horizontal x-axis is labeled "Year" with points at 1980, 1990, 2000, 2010, and 2020. The graph contains three series: USA, UK, and Japan. For USA, consumption values are approximately 3.7 in 1980, 4.6 in 1990, 6.4 in 2000, 7.4 in 2010, and 8.0 in 2020. For UK, values are approximately 1.5 in 1980, 2.6 in 1990, 3.5 in 2000, 5.3 in 2010, and 6.5 in 2020. For Japan, values are approximately 0.5 in 1980, 1.0 in 1990, 2.0 in 2000, 3.0 in 2010, and 3.5 in 2020.

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The provided graph below represents information on the average amount of junk food per person per week in USA, UK and Japan from 1980 to 2020.

According to the graph, it can be seen that the fast food mostly was consumed in USA in all years between 1980 and 2020, whereas it was ingested marginally in Japan. However all three of them made the same trend.

Regarding with USA, the fast food started at the highest point of 3.5 per person per week in 1980. Then it went up to 4.5 in 1990. Following this, the number of fast food increased markedly and peaked 8 in 2020. But the average amount of food in UK was lower than that in USA, starting at the point of 1.5. This amount of servings grew and reached to 6.5 in 2020.

The number of foods in Japan experienced exactly the same trend. However, the difference between UK and Japan in 1980 was smaller than the difference between them in 2020.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

japan: 4

amount: 3

between: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main trends and making comparisons between the three countries. It correctly identifies that the USA had the highest consumption throughout the period, Japan the lowest, and that all three showed an upward trend. However, there are some minor inaccuracies (e.g., '3.5' instead of '3.7' for the USA in 1980, and '4.5' instead of '4.6' in 1990) and a few omissions, such as not mentioning specific values for Japan at each point. The report could be improved by including more precise data for all countries and ensuring the language is more formal and precise (e.g., 'ingested' is not appropriate for food consumption). Overall, the response is relevant and sufficient, with only minor lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure, with an introduction and separate paragraphs for the USA/UK and Japan. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'all three of them made the same trend', 'the number of foods in Japan'). The final sentence introduces a comparison that is not fully developed, and the paragraphing could be more logical, with clearer separation of trends and comparisons. To improve, use clear topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect, such as one country or a specific comparison.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'started at the highest point', 'went up', 'increased markedly', 'peaked'), but there is limited range and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'ingested' instead of 'consumed', 'the number of foods' instead of 'the amount of fast food'). The phrasing is often repetitive and lacks sophistication. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease', and ensure precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'consumption was highest', 'showed a steady rise'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward constructions that affect clarity. Examples include 'Regarding with USA' (should be 'Regarding the USA' or 'As for the USA'), 'the fast food mostly was consumed' (word order), 'peaked 8' (should be 'peaked at 8'), and 'reached to 6.5' (should be 'reached 6.5'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the errors are noticeable. To improve, review common preposition and word order rules, and practice using a variety of complex structures with accuracy.

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