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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the main reasons people gave for moving away from a particular capital city to the countryside. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a line graph with three lines indicating different reasons for people moving from a capital city to the countryside from 1990 to 2010; data include rising cost of living, traffic, and lifestyle. Rising cost of living: 1990—20,000, 2000—60,000, 2010—80,000; traffic: 1990—10,000, 2000—40,000, 2010—70,000; lifestyle: 1990—10,000, 2000—30,000, 2010—40,000.

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The line graph illustrates relocating from particular capital city to the countryside caused by main reasons from 1990 to 2010.

Overall, x-axis shows a period of 20 years and y-axis number from 10.000 to 90.000. Having said that, we can see that all those three lines have experienced increase, presenting a large number of the population who consider that these statistics have a heavy impact on life in the town.

Rising cost of living stood over 60.000 in 1990, then grew slightly until it reached its high peak with number over 80.000 in the 10 year gap. After 2000, it drastically dropped below 80.000 in 2010, which represents reducing this problem, despite beeing on top of this graph.

The traffic and lifestyle were on starting points of 20.000 i early 1990. The black line was increasing slightly through these years and came to 40.000 in 2010, and according to assumption it will rise more in the future. However, the red one expanded drastically to 60.000 in 2010, making busy roads the most problematic in this case.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph and ensure clear and logical organization of your ideas. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The introduction is adequate, but the overall structure could be improved with clearer topic sentences for each paragraph. Transitions between ideas are not always smooth, making it harder for the reader to follow the trends and comparisons. For example, the shift from the 'rising cost of living' to 'traffic and lifestyle' lacks a clear connection. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to effectively describe the data. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'stood over 60.000 in 1990'). To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and changes, such as 'increased significantly,' 'plateaued,' or 'fluctuated.' Using more specific language will enhance the clarity and impact of your report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, incorrect verb tenses ('beeing' instead of 'being'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('relocating from particular capital city'). Sentence structure is also somewhat simplistic. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Proofreading carefully for errors in tense, agreement, and word choice is essential.

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