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Band 4+: The line graph below shows the monthly ridership of four separate transportation froms in a European metropolitian area between 1980 and 2030.

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The image depicts four transportation modes from 1980-2030 in a European metro area: Subway begins at 2.5 million commuters in 1980, peaks at 4.5 million by 2020, and concludes at 4.5 million in 2030; Tram starts under 1 million, hits approximately 1 million by 2000, rises to 1.8 million by 2030; Bus commences at 1.5 million, peaks near 3.7 million by 2000, then drops to just over 3 million by 2030; Bike Share launches in 2010 slightly above 0 million, progressively increases to 1 million by 2030.

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The line graph illustrate the monthly ridership of four separate which is Subway, Tram, Bus, Bike share transportation forms in a European metropolitan area between 1980 adn 2030.

Overall, the best consequence show the Subway then other. However, the lowest result experienced by Bike share.

In addition the Subway began rising from 2.5 million in 1980, but 1980 to 1990 the figure did not change, while from 1990 to 2010 witnessed a peak from 2.5 million to 3.5 million, meanwhile from 2010 to 2020 this line did not change, while in 2030 figure reached a enormous growth to 4.5 million. The second one is Tram started climbing from 1980, from 1980 to 1990 the figure experienced a little climb from 0.3 to 0.5, and then from 2000 to 2020 display a large development from 0.5 to 1.5 million, nonetheless figure did not stop rising in 2030 to 2 million.

On the other hand there are the least figure’s which is Bus set off from 1980, from 1980 to 2020 illustrate the dramatical decease from above 1.5 to 1.1 million, while from 2020 to 2030 kept falling to 0.8 million. The other one is Bike share the the most noticeable feature on this figure is every line began from 1980, but this one is started from 2000, and then from 2000 to 2020 the figure experienced the small climb from 0.2 to 0.5 million, and then began rising agin in 2030 from 0.5 to 0.6 million.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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million: 9

figure: 6

subway: 3

other: 3

experienced: 3

began: 3

rising: 3

while: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the trends for all four modes of transport. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some trends described contradict the provided visual description (for example, the Bus is described as decreasing significantly, whereas the description suggests a peak and a slight drop, and the Bike Share start date is inconsistent). The overview is also quite weak and uses imprecise language like 'best consequence'. To improve, focus on using more accurate mathematical descriptions (increase, decrease, fluctuate, remain steady) and ensure that the data points mentioned align closely with the visual information provided. Work on sentence structure to ensure that the relationship between different time periods and figures is clear to the reader.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical in that it attempts to group data, but the progression is difficult to follow due to repetitive sentence structures and poor use of cohesive devices. The transitions between different time periods and different transportation modes are often abrupt or incorrectly used (e.g., using 'nonetheless' or 'on the other hand' in ways that do not logically connect the ideas). To improve, focus on using a variety of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Subsequently,' 'Regarding...') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and often inaccurate in a technical context. Phrases like 'the best consequence show,' 'the lowest result experienced,' and 'dramatical decease' are not appropriate for an academic report. There is also significant repetition of words like 'figure' and 'climb.' To improve, aim to use more precise academic verbs for trends (e.g., 'fluctuated,' 'surged,' 'declined,' 'plateaued') and avoid using subjective words like 'best' or 'result' when describing data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that impede communication. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'graph illustrate'), incorrect preposition usage, and fragmented sentences. The sentence structures are often run-on or poorly constructed, making it hard to distinguish between different pieces of information. I recommend practicing complex sentence structures (using 'while,' 'whereas,' and 'although' correctly) and focusing on basic sentence accuracy, particularly in tense consistency and article usage.

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