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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the percentage of the population living in urban areas in four countries between 1970 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a line graph titled "Percentage of population living in urban areas, 1970–2020", with the vertical y-axis labeled "Percentage of population (%)" scaled from 0 to 100 in increments of 10, and the horizontal x-axis labeled "Year" displaying decades from 1970 to 2020. The legend lists four entities under "Country": UK, USA, Japan, and India. Numerical data points across years (1970, 1980, 1990, 2000, 2010, 2020) are as follows: UK at approximately 77%, 78%, 78%, 79%, 81.5%, and 83.5%; USA at approximately 70%, 72.5%, 78%, 80%, 83%, and 84.5%; Japan at approximately 62%, 75.5%, 78%, 79%, 90%, and 92%; and India at 40%, approximately 53%, 65.5%, 68%, 71%, and 75%.

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The given line graph compares the percentage of population living in urban areas in four countries, namely The Great Britain, USA, Japan and India from 1970 to 2020.

Overall, all the four countries showed an upward trend in population in cities between 1970 to 2020. In 1970, the highest percentage of population was in urban areas of UK, whereas in 2020 it was in Japan. Indian cities had the lowest urban population percentage in these years.

Great Britain was the highest percentage of population compared to other countries in 1970 to 1990, which was 78%. Then it gradually rose up to approximately 83% in 2020. Japan also showed the increase in their population in these 50 years, that is from 61% to 91%. The growth percentage in Japan was almost constant from 1980 to 2020 (around 78%).

USA had the second largest population percentage in 1970 and it remained at the same position in 2020 as well. The percentage of population was 70% and 78% in 1970 and 1990 respectively. Then it increased to 83% in 2020. India’s urban population increased from 40% in 1970 to 65% in 1990 and then gradually rose to 75% by 2020.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

population: 9

percentage: 7

urban: 4

japan: 4

countries: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and key trends, and it makes relevant comparisons between countries. The data is generally accurate, with minor inaccuracies (e.g., Japan's 2020 value and the claim of constant growth from 1980 to 2020). The structure is clear, and the word count meets the requirement. To improve, ensure all data points are precisely reported and avoid vague statements like 'almost constant' without specifying the trend. Additionally, consider using more varied vocabulary and complex sentence structures to enhance lexical resource and grammatical range.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'Great Britain was the highest percentage of population compared to other countries in 1970 to 1990, which was 78%.' and 'The growth percentage in Japan was almost constant from 1980 to 2020 (around 78%).' - the latter is inaccurate and confusing). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some sentences are not well-linked. To improve, use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific comparison or trend. Also, use a range of linking words and referencing to make the text more cohesive.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'upward trend', 'gradually rose', 'increased'). However, there is limited range and some imprecise or informal word choices (e.g., 'The Great Britain' should be 'the UK', 'showed the increase' is awkward, 'growth percentage' is not standard). To achieve a higher score, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'experienced a steady rise', 'witnessed a significant surge', 'remained relatively stable') and ensure correct collocations. Also, avoid repetition and use synonyms effectively. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'Great Britain was the highest percentage of population compared to other countries' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'The UK had the highest percentage of population among the four countries.' Also, 'Japan also showed the increase in their population' should be 'Japan also showed an increase in its population.' There are issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, focus on sentence accuracy, use a wider range of structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses), and proofread to eliminate errors.

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