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Band 4+: The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image includes a line graph and two pie charts; the line graph displays money spent in the UK by overseas visitors from 1980 to 2010 with data points: 1980 - 7,500 million; 1985 - 8,000 million; 1990 - 9,000 million; 1995 - 10,000 million; 2000 - 11,000 million; 2005 - 10,500 million; 2010 - 9,000 million; the pie charts indicate reasons for visiting: in 1980, 44.1% holiday, 25.7% visiting, 16.6% business, 13.6% other; in 2010, 39.1% holiday, 28.2% visiting, 22.8% business, 9.9% other.

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The chart illustrate the location of dance classes and diferrent age group attending the classes .

Overall,it seems to be that private studios seen as good population of dance lover whereas ballet dance are more preffered by both age groups .

After analyzing the information it is crystal clear that,loaction of danceare more preffered by people is private studio by 48% as community halls are have18% . In addition,college based studios are liked less with 10% only but schools halls have good percentile as compared to college studio that is 24%.

shifting attention to remaining data ,as different age group like differ dance so ballet dance mostly likeed by under 11 age group with 600 wheras as twice of this liked by 11-16 .Additionally tap dance are mosyly liked by teenagers with 450 as negligible change seen in 11-16 age group with 420 . As modern dance are more favoured by 11-16 age group with 500 as 300 by tennagers .

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dance: 7

group: 5

liked: 3

11-16: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. It describes a line graph and pie charts about UK visitor spending and reasons, which are not part of the given task about dance classes. The data mentioned (e.g., private studios 48%, ballet 600) does not match the visual description provided. The report also lacks clear comparisons and has numerous spelling and grammatical errors. To improve, focus on the actual visual information, select key features, and make relevant comparisons. Ensure data is accurately reported and the response is well-organized with clear paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The introduction is brief and the body paragraphs mix different data points without clear transitions. Cohesive devices are used ineffectively (e.g., 'After analyzing the information', 'shifting attention to remaining data'), and the overall message is difficult to follow due to abrupt shifts and incomplete comparisons. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, group related data (e.g., location in one paragraph, types in another), and use a range of linking words (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'whereas') to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with several spelling errors (e.g., 'diferrent', 'preffered', 'loaction', 'likeed', 'mosyly', 'tennagers') and informal expressions (e.g., 'it is crystal clear', 'shifting attention'). There is some attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'liked', 'favoured', 'preferred'), but the range is narrow and lacks precision. To improve, use a wider range of formal academic vocabulary (e.g., 'predominantly', 'notably', 'in contrast'), and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Avoid informal phrases and aim for precise data descriptions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding, including subject-verb agreement ('The chart illustrate'), incorrect verb forms ('are have'), missing articles, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex sentences. Punctuation is often missing or incorrect. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice, conditionals) and ensure subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation. Proofreading for common errors is essential.

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Band 4+: The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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