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Band 6+: The line graph shows the average cost of monthly contract of four different cellular companies in one European country from January to September in 2012 measured in euros.

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The image features a line graph plotting four categories—DOMO, LEX, SIM TX, and ALPHA—across nine months: Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, May, Jun, Jul, Aug, and Sep, with a vertical axis labeled from 0 to 35 in increments of 5. Values for DOMO are approximately 15 in Jan, 16.5 in Feb, 18 in Mar, 16.5 in Apr, 20 in May, 20 in Jun, 25 in Jul, 24 in Aug, and 22.5 in Sep. LEX records approximately 12 in Jan, 10 in Feb, 13 in Mar, 13 in Apr, 14 in May, 13 in Jun, 16.5 in Jul, 16.5 in Aug, and 18.5 in Sep. SIM TX registers approximately 8 in Jan, 7.5 in Feb, 8 in Mar, 11 in Apr, 11 in May, 14 in Jun, 10 in Jul, 8 in Aug, and 7.5 in Sep. ALPHA stands at 5 in Jan, 5 in Feb, approximately 7 in Mar, 8.5 in Apr, 7 in May, 4.5 in Jun, 10 in Jul, 13 in Aug, and 25 in Sep.

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The line graph illustrates the average price of every four weeks dealing with four different mobile companies in one European country from January to September in 2012 shown within euros.

Overall, Domo had the highest average cost from January to August, while Alpha showed the largest number of prices at the end of the period. Lex and Sim TX companies’s lines are fluctuated during the period.

Looking at the details, Domo in January accounted for 15 euros, and it increased to nearly 18 euros in March, but it decreased to around 16 euros in April. Then, Domo’s figure rose to 29 euros in May and stayed constant between May and June. Lastly, it increased to 25 euros and it was the highest average cost in July and it declined to around 23 euros. With regards to Lex company, it made up nearly 13 euros in January, while it was lower by 2 euros than Domo company, but it decreased to 10 euros in February and in March again rose to 13 euros. Apart from that, in May it accounted for 14 euros, in June declined to 13 euros, finally it went down to 18 euros.

Turning to Sim TX, the company contributed 8 euros in January, and increased to 11 euros in April, between April and May this figure stayed constant. In May it increased to June it was around 15 euros, after that it fell to 8 euros again in September. Alpha company accounted for 5 euros in January, and it rose to 9 euros in April, but this line declined to again around 5 euros in June. Lastly, from June down to August, and it showed 13 euros, and it overtook in September, it stood at 25 euros.

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euros: 21

january: 6

increased: 4

around: 4

april: 4

company: 4

average: 3

september: 3

accounted: 3

declined: 3

again: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main trends and providing specific data for each company. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Domo's May value, Lex's final value, and Sim TX's June value) and a few awkward phrasings (e.g., 'every four weeks dealing with' and 'companies's lines are fluctuated'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and use more precise language. Additionally, the overview could be more comprehensive by mentioning the fluctuations in all companies, not just Lex and Sim TX.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for different companies. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'it increased to 29 euros in May' where the actual value is 20, and 'it went down to 18 euros' for Lex, which is actually an increase). The paragraphing is generally logical, but the transitions between ideas within paragraphs could be smoother. To improve, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a clear set of data points and use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased', 'decreased', 'rose', 'declined', 'stayed constant') and some appropriate synonyms for 'cost' (e.g., 'price', 'figure'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward choices, such as 'every four weeks dealing with' instead of 'monthly contract', and 'contributed' for 'accounted for'. The phrase 'companies's lines' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'the cost of a monthly contract', 'the figure for X') and avoid literal translations. Also, vary the vocabulary to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Lex and Sim TX companies's lines are fluctuated' should be 'the lines for Lex and Sim TX fluctuated'. Also, there are issues with subject-verb agreement and tense consistency (e.g., 'it increased to 29 euros' should be 'it rose to 20 euros'). Some sentences are run-ons or lack proper punctuation. To improve, proofread for grammar and punctuation, and practice using a wider range of structures with accuracy.

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