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Band 5+: The line graph shows the average number of people attending top-level football matches in three European countries from 1980 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image contains a line graph illustrating the average attendance per top-level football match in Italy, England, and Germany from 1980 to 2004. In 1980, Italy had an attendance of 39,000, England 32,000, and Germany 25,000. By 1984, Italy's attendance slightly decreased to 38,000, England’s increased to 34,000, and Germany maintained 25,000. In 1988, Italy’s figure was 31,000, England's decreased to 30,000, and Germany's was stable at 25,000. In 1992, Italy's attendance further dropped to 29,000, England’s dipped to 21,000, while Germany's rose to 30,000. By 1996, Italy had 29,000, England slightly increased at 24,000, and Germany remained at 30,000. In 2000, Italy’s remained constant at 29,000, England increased to 33,000, and Germany stayed at 29,000. Finally, in 2004, Italy had 29,000, England rose to 35,000, while Germany experienced an increase to 33,000.

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The graph illustrates the number of people attending in top-level football matches in Italy, England and Germany within the period of 24 years, starting from 1980.

Overall, at the beginning of the period the average of attendance in football matches in England and Germany were the lower than Italy but showed significantly growth at the end of the period, despite Italy was the highest number of attendance at the beginning it witnessed a rapidly decrease at the end.

If we look at Germany it started at 25 thousand of people in 1980 and there was a noticeable decrease to 19 thousand over the next 6 years. After that, despite having decreased significantly Germany sharply rose to 33 thousand of people in the remaining period. Italy showed almost the same trend starting at 26 thousand of individuals and slightly decline to 23 over the next 6 years. However, it started growth during the period and showed the enormous increase to 34 thousand at the end of the period.

By contrast, England showed an opposite trend. Although it started with the highest attendance, at about 30 thousand people, the number increased slightly to 37 thousand in 1986 before declining significantly. Attendance then fell continuously, reaching approximately 25 thousand by the end of the period, making it the lowest among the three countries.

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thousand: 8

period: 6

people: 4

italy: 4

germany: 4

attendance: 4

showed: 4

number: 3

england: 3

years: 3

significantly: 3

started: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misrepresentations of the data. The overall trend is incorrectly described: Italy is said to decrease while actually it remains relatively stable, and England is described as starting highest and ending lowest, which is not supported by the data. The figures cited (e.g., Germany dropping to 19,000, Italy starting at 26,000) do not match the provided information. The report also omits key comparisons and fails to accurately summarize the main features. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data, clearly identifying trends for each country, and making relevant comparisons. Ensure that the figures and trends align with the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow of ideas is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward transitions. For example, the phrase 'despite Italy was the highest number of attendance at the beginning it witnessed a rapidly decrease at the end' is confusing and could be rephrased for clarity. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved by grouping countries more logically (e.g., discussing Italy and Germany together, then England separately) to enhance coherence. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that comparisons are made explicitly to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'illustrates', 'witnessed', 'decline', 'sharply rose', 'enormous increase'), which is appropriate for the task. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward word choices, such as 'the average of attendance' (should be 'the average attendance'), 'showed significantly growth' (should be 'showed significant growth'), and 'rapidly decrease' (should be 'rapid decrease'). The phrase 'the lower than Italy' is grammatically incorrect and should be 'lower than Italy'. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'experienced a significant increase', 'saw a steady decline') and avoid repetition of 'showed' and 'started'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. For instance, 'the number of people attending in top-level football matches' should be 'the number of people attending top-level football matches' (remove 'in'). There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the average of attendance ... were' should be 'was'), and incorrect use of conjunctions (e.g., 'despite Italy was' should be 'although Italy was' or 'despite Italy being'). Additionally, the sentence 'If we look at Germany it started at 25 thousand of people' is informal and contains an error ('25 thousand of people' should be '25 thousand people'). To improve, focus on using a wider range of complex structures accurately, and proofread to eliminate basic errors in tense, agreement, and prepositions.

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