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Band 7+: The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image illustrates the monthly income (in $000s) from January to December for four cafes in New York: The Tea Room (TT), Internet Express (IE), Wi-Fi Café (WC), and Café Cool (CC). January incomes were TT 160, IE 80, WC 60, CC 20; February TT 140, IE 60, WC 40, CC 20; March TT 120, IE 40, WC 80, CC 20; April TT 100, IE 50, WC 100, CC 20; May TT 140, IE 60, WC 60, CC 20; June TT 100, IE 50, WC 50, CC 40; July TT 80, IE 70, WC 80, CC 40; August TT 110, IE 100, WC 60, CC 40; September TT 130, IE 110, WC 40, CC 60; October TT 80, IE 130, WC 80, CC 80; November TT 80, IE 170, WC 100, CC 100; December TT 60, IE 180, WC 140, CC 120.

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The line graph compares the average amount of money that four cafes in New York earned in 2024. Overall, while Wifi Cafe, Internet Express, and Cafe Cool experienced growth, the line of The Tea Room saw a sharp downward trend.

Between January and May, the income of The Tea Room was the highest, starting at around $160,000 peaking at nearly $180,000 in March and then dropping to $140,000 in April. In contrast, Cafe Cool was the lowest, fluctuating between $20,000 and $40,000. During the same period, Internet Express and Wifi Cafe increased steadily, reaching $80,000 and $60,000 respectively in May.

From June to December,the revenue of Wifi Cafe increased strongly surpassing all other cafes to reach a peak of nearly $190,000 in December. Conversely, the earning of the Tea Room dropped down to $50,000. Internet Express continued its rise to $140,000, while Cafe Cool ended at $120,000.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

internet: 3

express: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task by describing trends and making comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., The Tea Room's peak in March is stated as nearly $180,000, but the data shows $120,000; Internet Express and Wi-Fi Café are described as increasing steadily, but their values fluctuate; Wi-Fi Café is said to reach nearly $190,000 in December, but the data shows $140,000). These errors detract from the accuracy of the response. Additionally, the report omits some key details and misinterprets the overall trend for Internet Express, which actually shows a significant increase. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and ensuring that the main features and comparisons are clearly and correctly presented. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs. The message is generally easy to follow. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'the line of The Tea Room' which could be more naturally expressed. Additionally, the transition between the first and second body paragraphs could be smoother. To improve, consider using a wider range of cohesive devices and ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a clear time period or trend.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'average amount of money' for 'income'). There is evidence of a range of vocabulary, such as 'sharp downward trend', 'increased steadily', and 'surpassing all other cafes'. However, there are some inaccuracies and less natural choices, such as 'the line of The Tea Room' and 'the earning of the Tea Room dropped down'. To improve, focus on using more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'the revenue of The Tea Room declined') and avoid repetition of words like 'cafes'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences (e.g., 'While Wifi Cafe, Internet Express, and Cafe Cool experienced growth, the line of The Tea Room saw a sharp downward trend'). Punctuation is generally correct, but there are a few errors, such as missing commas (e.g., 'starting at around $160,000 peaking at nearly $180,000' should be 'starting at around $160,000, peaking at nearly $180,000') and subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'the earning of the Tea Room dropped down' should be 'the earnings of The Tea Room dropped'). To improve, pay closer attention to comma usage in complex sentences and ensure subject-verb agreement.

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