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Band 6+: The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image features two sections: a line graph and a pie chart. Line graph: In June, West Eaton at 50, Ryeslip at 300, Sutton Wood at 200, Church Mount at 150; July, West Eaton at 100, Ryeslip at 250, Sutton Wood at 250, Church Mount at 100; August, West Eaton at 150, Ryeslip at 200, Sutton Wood at 100, Church Mount at 50; September, West Eaton at 200, Ryeslip at 150, Sutton Wood at 300, Church Mount at 0. Pie chart: Self-Help 43%, Fiction 14%, History 14%, Science 10%, Biography 19%.

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The line graph demonstrates the amount of books being borrowed in various months, namely June, July, August as well as September in the year 2014 from libraries in four villages. Moreover, the pie chart illustates the proportion of types of books borrowed over this period.

At first glance, the number of books borrowed increased overtime in all villages except Ryeslip. Furthermore, there is a majority of fiction books borrowed at 43 percent.

Starting with Ryeslip, the amount of books borrowed in Ryeslip drops significantly from 300 to barely 165. On the contrary, West Eaton and Church Mount shows a similar trend, which both rose dramatically from 50 to 150.

In terms of books that were borrowed, there’s a minority of self-help books at the percentage of 10. Which the proportion of fiction books is 4 times more than it, which is 43 percent.

In a nut-shell, fiction books are the most popular catagories among all types. Also, there’s a positive relationships between time and number of people borrowed books.

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books: 10

borrowed: 7

ryeslip: 3

fiction: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is weak and doesn't fully capture the main trends. The description of the line graph lacks specific details and accurate comparisons. The pie chart description is also somewhat limited. To improve, focus on providing more precise data from the graphs and making clearer comparisons between the different categories and time periods. Also, ensure the overview effectively summarizes the key trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The organization into paragraphs is present, but the connections between sentences and ideas within paragraphs could be strengthened to enhance coherence. For instance, the transition between the line graph and pie chart descriptions could be smoother. The use of cohesive devices is present but could be more varied and sophisticated to avoid repetition and improve the overall flow of the report. The final paragraph feels somewhat disconnected from the preceding analysis and introduces a generalization that isn't fully supported by the data presented.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary that is generally appropriate for the task, but there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or sophisticated. For example, using 'amount' instead of 'number' for countable items like books, and 'rose dramatically' is a bit vague. Expanding the range of vocabulary related to trends and proportions would enhance the report. There are also some inaccuracies, such as stating that fiction books had a majority at 43 percent, when self-help books actually had the highest percentage.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'increased overtime' should be 'increased over time,' and 'there's a minority of self-help books at the percentage of 10' is awkwardly phrased. Correcting these errors and ensuring subject-verb agreement throughout the report would improve grammatical accuracy. Also, the statement 'positive relationships between time and number of people borrowed books' is grammatically incorrect and unclear.

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