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Band 7+: The line graph shows the number of tourists visiting three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

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The image features a line graph titled "Number of tourists visiting three countries, 2005–2015", with the x-axis labeled "Year" (spanning 2005, 2007, 2009, 2011, 2013, and 2015) and the y-axis labeled "Number of tourists (millions)" ranging from 2 to 10 in increments of 1. Data for Country A records 2 million tourists in 2005, 3 million in 2007, 4 million in 2009, 6 million in 2011, 8 million in 2013, and 10 million in 2015. Data for Country B shows 4 million in 2005, 5 million in 2007, 7 million in 2009, 8 million in 2011, 7 million in 2013, and 9 million in 2015. Data for Country C documents 7 million in 2005, 6 million in 2007, 5 million in 2009, 4 million in 2011, 3 million in 2013, and 2 million in 2015.

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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors three different countries from 2005 to 2015.

Overall, it is clear that the number of visitors to country C was at the top of the chart in the first year, while by the end of the period, the number of tourists visiting to country A peaked. Country B experienced an upward trend.

To start with country A, the figure was the lowest on the chart in the first year, at 2 million visitors. Tourists saw a sharp increase from 2 million in 2005 to 10 million in 2015. With respect to country B, the number of tourists climbed markedly from 4 million in 2005 to 8 million in 2011. Despite decreasing from 8 million in 2011 to 7 million in 2013, the number of visitors rose to 9 million in the last year.

Finally, country C had the highest at the beginning of the period, at 7 million tourist. There was a steady decline the number of visitors to 2 million in 2015.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

million: 10

number: 6

country: 6

visitors: 5

tourists: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main trends and providing relevant data for all three countries. The overview is clear, and key features are highlighted. Minor grammatical issues (e.g., 'visiting to country A', '7 million tourist') and a slight inconsistency in describing Country B's trend as 'upward' (despite a dip) are present but do not detract from overall clarity. To improve, ensure precise language and consistent trend descriptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and a body that discusses each country in turn. The use of cohesive devices such as 'To start with', 'With respect to', and 'Finally' helps the reader follow the progression. However, the paragraphing could be improved by separating the discussion of each country into distinct paragraphs for better clarity. Additionally, the final sentence about Country C could be more smoothly integrated to avoid a slightly abrupt ending.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for describing trends, such as 'sharp increase', 'climbed markedly', 'steady decline', and 'peaked'. There is some repetition of 'number of visitors' and 'tourists', which could be varied with synonyms like 'figures', 'arrivals', or 'visitor numbers'. The phrase 'at the top of the chart' is slightly informal; 'highest' or 'the largest number' would be more precise. Overall, the lexical resource is adequate but could be more sophisticated. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including comparative forms and complex sentences. There are a few minor errors and awkward phrasings, such as 'visiting three different countries' (should be 'visiting three different countries' or 'visiting three countries'), 'visiting to country A' (should be 'visiting country A'), and 'had the highest at the beginning' (should be 'had the highest number at the beginning'). Also, 'a steady decline the number of visitors' is missing a preposition ('in'). These issues are minor and do not impede understanding, but correcting them would improve accuracy.

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