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Band 7+: The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

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The image presents a line graph titled "Sugar production and consumption from 2001-2011". The vertical axis is labeled "Million tonnes" and ranges from 0 to 30 in increments of 5, while the horizontal axis displays years from 2001 to 2011 with labels every two years (2001, 2003, 2005, 2007, 2009, 2011) alongside vertical gridlines for each year. Two series are depicted: solid line "Production" and dotted line "Consumption". Approximate values for Production (in million tonnes): 2001: ~18.2, 2002: ~19.5, 2003: ~17.8, 2004: ~13.5, 2005: ~13.0, 2006: ~19.0, 2007: ~28.2, 2008: ~26.8, 2009: ~16.5, 2010: ~21.0, and 2011: ~26.2. Approximate values for Consumption (in million tonnes): 2001: ~15.5, 2002: ~17.5, 2003: ~20.0, 2004: ~18.8, 2005: ~19.5, 2006: ~19.5, 2007: ~20.2, 2008: ~21.0, 2009: ~21.5, 2010: ~21.5, and 2011: ~23.0.

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The line graph details information about manufacturing and consuming of sugar in India between 2001 and 2011. Overall consumption of sugar experienced a steady upward trend, despite a slight dip in the third year. Production of sugar reached its peak in 2007, whereas production fluctuated considerably.

Turning to sugar production first, it started with approximately 18 million in 2001, before rising slightly to 19 in 2002. It then experienced downward trend until 2005 and showed 13 million, before reaching its peak in 2007, at about 28 million. After 2 years it dropped slightly to 26 and decreased sharply to nearly 13 million. In the final year the figure surged to 26 million.

Consumption of sugar of sugar stood at 15 million in 2001 followed by moderate increase to 20 million in 2003. Despite a slight dip to 19 million it continued its steady increase until 2011 and finished with nearly 22 million

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The report adequately covers the main trends and key features of the graph, including the overall upward trend in consumption and the fluctuating production with a peak in 2007. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., production in 2009 and 2011, consumption final value) and a few omissions (e.g., the exact values for some years). The structure is clear, with a brief overview and separate paragraphs for production and consumption. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and consider adding a comparison between production and consumption where relevant.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall trend statement and separate paragraphs for production and consumption. However, the flow is slightly disrupted by a few awkward transitions and a missing concluding sentence for the consumption paragraph. To improve, ensure each paragraph ends with a clear summary or link to the next, and use cohesive devices more naturally to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, with some good range (e.g., 'experienced a steady upward trend', 'fluctuated considerably', 'surged'). However, there are some repetitions and imprecise word choices (e.g., 'manufacturing and consuming' instead of 'production and consumption', 'showed 13 million' instead of 'stood at 13 million'). To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms and more precise terms to describe changes and data points.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect clarity. For example, 'It then experienced downward trend' is missing an article, 'After 2 years it dropped slightly to 26 and decreased sharply to nearly 13 million' is confusing and contains a tense inconsistency, and 'Consumption of sugar of sugar' has a repetition error. To improve, proofread carefully for article usage, tense consistency, and avoid repetition. Also, ensure that all sentences are complete and clearly convey the intended meaning.

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