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Band 4+: The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph with a vertical axis scaled from 0 to 200 and a horizontal axis representing years from 2005 to 2015, plotting data for four countries. Eritrea's data points are approximately: 2005 (5), 2006 (6), 2007 (5), 2008 (6), 2009 (6), 2010 (7), 2011 (6), 2012 (8), 2013 (10), 2014 (11), 2015 (10). India's data points are approximately: 2005 (8), 2006 (10), 2007 (12), 2008 (18), 2009 (25), 2010 (35), 2011 (48), 2012 (65), 2013 (75), 2014 (85), 2015 (85). The UK's data points are approximately: 2005 (102), 2006 (118), 2007 (123), 2008 (123), 2009 (124), 2010 (128), 2011 (125), 2012 (125), 2013 (128), 2014 (128), 2015 (128). Uruguay's data points are approximately: 2005 (38), 2006 (68), 2007 (88), 2008 (102), 2009 (120), 2010 (135), 2011 (140), 2012 (152), 2013 (165), 2014 (152), 2015 (152).

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The line graphs illustrate how four different country, such as Eritrea, India, UK, and Uruguay for mobile phone subcriptions throughout 2005 – 2015.

Overall, Eritrea line was the most dramatic increases in the line graphs picture, even ended up with the most subcriptions in the 2015. While the other countries keep stable in their position and India with their stable increased by year since 2008.

Eritrea start the journey in 2005 with under 50 subcriptions and keep making dramatic increases with the peak in 2013 with 150 subcriptions which is bringing them to the most subcriptions in the end of the graph. India start from the very bottom in 2005 but keep making good performance which shows up for their stable increased from 2008 to 2015.

Even though UK and Uruguay have a different amount of subcriptions, but their looks a like in term of stability. UK start with 100 subcriptions in 2005 and continously in that range until 2015. While Uruguay keep in the under 50 range.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

subcriptions: 7

their: 4

india: 3

uruguay: 3

stable: 3

start: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The description of Eritrea's trend is incorrect, and the concluding paragraph contains inaccurate information about Uruguay's subscription numbers. The writing also suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data trends and use precise language. Proofread carefully to correct grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is weak, and the transitions between sentences and paragraphs are abrupt. Consider organizing the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends or countries, and a concluding statement. Use cohesive devices such as conjunctions, pronouns, and synonyms to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and imprecise language. For example, phrases like "keep making dramatic increases" and "good performance" are vague and could be replaced with more specific and descriptive terms. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., growth, decline, fluctuation) and quantities (e.g., percentage, proportion, ratio). Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. For example, the first sentence has errors in noun agreement and preposition usage. Proofread carefully for grammatical errors and pay attention to sentence structure. Practice using a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, complex) to improve the clarity and sophistication of your writing.

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