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Band 5+: The map shows planned changes to a building over a period of time. Please compare and contrast the changes during this period.

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The image shows two floor plans labeled "present" and "future." In the "present" plan, there is a kitchen, canteen, stock room, two areas labeled "grass," WCs, reception, entrance, and three offices. In the "future" plan, there are three offices, stock room, reception, entrance, outdoor activity area, coffee machine, WCs, and meeting area. The arrangement of spaces differs between the two plans, with "office" spaces increasing and amenities like a "coffee machine" and "meeting area" being added in the "future" layout.

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As we got here from the image, we’re going to change grass section from the most left side of the map into an area for outdoor activity such as sports, open kitchen etc. Guests can get in from the entrance in the middle of the area between office. Then moving to the kitchen and canteen, each area are going to be revamped into an office with each area gonna have 1 office room.

All the office rooms also have some changes. Before, there is 2 section in that area, it will be change to be 1 section or one room only.

While the office room below the canteen are going to switch its position with the bundled entrance and reception. Now after moving switchting the area, above the entrance we are going to have a reception for welcoming the guests. As the above text said, the position of entrance plus reception is going to be switched over with the office below the canteen, so now the office is under the stock room.Stock room remained the same as before. Instead the WCs below the stock room will be removed.Final part the rightest grass section is going to be changed into a meeting area. Starting from the top side from left to right, we got a small section for coffee machine then right side to it we will be having a WCs. Move to the bottom of the room, we have the meeting area with a large tv in the middle between two soft long sofa.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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office: 7

going: 6

section: 5

entrance: 4

canteen: 3

below: 3

reception: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the changes to the building layout. However, the organization is somewhat unclear, and the language contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which affects clarity. To improve, focus on organizing the information more logically, perhaps by grouping changes by area or function. Also, work on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to describe the changes, but the organization is somewhat unclear. The use of phrases like "As we got here from the image" is informal and doesn't contribute to a professional tone. Transitions between different areas of the plan are abrupt, making it difficult to follow the sequence of changes. Paragraphing could be improved to group related changes together. Consider using more formal language and clearer transitions to guide the reader through the transformations.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. There's reliance on simple words like "change," "area," and "section." The report could benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the spatial relationships and transformations more accurately. For example, instead of "change," consider using words like "convert," "remodel," or "transform." Instead of "area," use "space," "zone," or "facility." Incorporating more specific and descriptive language would enhance the clarity and sophistication of the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentences are often convoluted and difficult to understand. For example, "each area are going to be revamped" should be "each area is going to be revamped." The phrase "moving switchting the area" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully for errors before submission is essential.

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