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Band 5+: The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts changes in a beachfront area from 1950 to present. In 1950: city north, playground west, dining tables southwestern inland, pavilion centrally inland, car park northeastern inland, two 25m pools west and east of beach, lighthouse eastern coast. Present: city northwest, car park northwest, dining tables slightly west-central inland, pavilion central-inland, car park northeastern inland, restaurant southwestern inland, surf club western coast by beach, two 25m pools west and east of beach, lighthouse eastern coast adjacent to surf club.

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The charts underneath represent the changes by which beachfront is recounstructed in australia between 1950 and present day.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the layout show significant changes within additional facilities, meanwhile the beach is still remain the same.

As we can see, the playground has been greatly demolished to replace car park, while the other car park is getting massive in present day. Next, the new pathway is added which can connect form city to the light house that located beside to the beach.

On the other hand, there are two 25 m pool beside each of the beach. Therefore, in present day, 50 m pool that located in the left side is extended where people able to enjoy swimming not only in the beach. For instant, the pavillion didn’t illustrate significant changes as well as the dining table. Last but not least, the massive surf club is greatly built beside of the pool, then a huge restaurant is established in the west side.

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