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Band 4+: The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summarize the information and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts bookstore layouts for 2000 and now, showing entrance placed consistently to the left with service desk nearby; in 2000, layout includes New Books centrally, Travel above New Books, Fiction dominating upper section, Hobbies and Cookery upper right corner, Art adjacent to Cookery, Non-fiction horizontally across bottom right section; currently, New Books positioned centrally left, Travel above New Books, Art now lower section left, Cookery centrally right, Fiction remains upper right, Non-fiction positioned vertically along the right, addition of Table centrally located now, Cafe introduced adjacent to Non-fiction.

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The illustrations depict the significant changes of a certain bookstore in 2000 and now.

Overall, there are a lot of differences in this store after 26 years.The most noticeable changes are the development of service,the relocating of fiction,cookery and art, and the disapearence of hobbies.

In the northern side, the table is emerged in hobbies,cookey and art position in 2000 so the cookey and art are relocated and hobbies place is removed. Thereforce, fiction space is declined for the moving of art and cookey which account for two third fiction space.Meanwhile the travel place is remained in origanal position.

In the sourthern to bookstore, the newsbook and service desk are maintained until nowadays while the cafe is apeared in nearby non-fiction which took place in the east of store in 2000. As a result, non-fiction moved to the northeast where had a fiction in 2000.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes, such as the relocation of sections and the addition of a cafe and table. However, the task achievement is limited by several inaccuracies in spatial description and logical connections. For instance, the description of the 'northern side' and the movement of sections is somewhat confusing and difficult to follow. To improve, focus on using clearer directional language (e.g., north, south, east, west) and ensure that the relationship between the old and new layouts is described logically. Additionally, while the focus is on task response, improving grammatical accuracy and spelling (e.g., 'disapearence', 'cookey', 'thereforce') would help in conveying the comparisons more effectively. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by significant issues with cohesive devices and sentence structure. While you attempt to use transition words like 'Overall', 'Meanwhile', and 'As a result', they are often used incorrectly or accompanied by grammatical errors that disrupt the flow. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly rather than just starting sentences with them. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that the relationship between sentences is clear to the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'disapearence', 'cookey', 'thereforce', 'origanal', 'apeared', 'sourthern'). There is also some awkward phrasing, such as 'the table is emerged in hobbies' and 'fiction space is declined'. To improve, work on expanding your range of vocabulary related to maps and changes (e.g., 'relocated', 'repositioned', 'replaced by', 'expanded'). Pay close attention to spelling and the correct collocation of words to ensure your descriptions sound natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and often impede communication. There are issues with verb tense (e.g., 'is emerged', 'is remained', 'is declined'), subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structures are often repetitive or incorrectly formed, making it difficult to follow the complex spatial changes described. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures and the use of the passive voice, which is very useful for describing changes in maps. Practice using different tenses correctly, especially when comparing a past state to a present one.

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