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Band 6+: The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two floor plans labeled "10 years ago" and "Today." Ten years ago, areas included Garden, Car park, Entrance, Reception, Storage, Hall (seats for 100), Coffee bar, Toilets, three Offices, Kitchen. Today, changes feature Indoor sports, alterations putting Storage and Toilets in new positions, a Cafe area replacing Coffee bar, and a reshuffle placing Kitchen, Office, Toilets distinctly different with maintained areas like Car park, Entrance, Reception, and Hall (seats for 100).

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The maps illustrate a community center 10 years ago compare to now. Overall, the center has undergone significant transformation, shifting from a simple layout to a modern background. The renovation of office areas contributes the most changes of center while several areas have remained unchanged.

Regarding to the old map, it used to have office areas which were converted into four pieces. However, a new cafe area has introduced at this area to replace the offices. Furthermore, the offices has relocated at the bottom of the new map nearly toilets. In addition, on the top of left corner, the garden was removed to construct an indoor sports area.

Moreover, it was two storage areas but at present one of them has been demolished and another has narrowed to erected a second toilet. Besides, several facilities have remained unchanged such as car park, kitchen, reception, entrance and the hall in the middle of the map today.

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The report covers the requirements of the task, describing the changes to the community center. There are some minor omissions and lapses in detail. To improve, ensure all significant changes are mentioned and described with greater precision. For example, specify the number of offices in the 'Today' layout and provide more detail about the changes to the storage areas.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate overview and presents the main changes. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider using more precise transitional phrases to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, instead of starting multiple sentences with 'In addition,' vary your linking words to enhance the flow. The paragraphing is generally acceptable, but could be refined to group related changes more logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate but lacks sophistication. There's some repetition of simple words and phrases. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to describe the changes more precisely. For example, instead of 'shifting from a simple layout to a modern background,' use more descriptive language to illustrate the transformation. Also, be careful with word choice; for instance, 'erected' is not the most suitable word for describing the creation of a toilet.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common errors include incorrect verb tenses ('compare' instead of 'compared'), incorrect preposition usage ('Regarding to' should be 'Regarding'), and subject-verb agreement issues ('offices has relocated'). There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules to enhance the accuracy of your writing. Proofreading carefully for these types of errors can significantly improve your score.

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